THE SECRET PLACE

Sally Omar
Author: Sally Omar
Word Count: 70
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THE SECRET PLACE

Thank you, Laura!!!!
Please check out my friend Laura’s (Dawnsky2) other awesome artwork & writings
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The Secret Place
Where they hide
They creep and crawl
Slip and slide

Between the rocks
And the crevices
They are secure
In the place safest

They glide along
Finding their prey
Eat hearty
By the day

When the sun goes down
And all is still
They creep and crawl
At their free will

The Secret place
Is their home
They slide away
But never far do they roam

  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill

    Gorgeous Sal, goes beautifully with the pic. Great work

  • Sally Omar replied

    Hilary, Thank you so much..I just pictured all those little creatures
    slipping and sliding…loved Laura’s pic…Sally xxoo

  • Max Gatrell

    Max Gatrell

    Delightful Sally as always, cute beyond words.

    M

  • Sally Omar replied

    Max, Thank you so much..little slippery sliding creatures..I could
    just picture them in Laura’s pic…Sally xxoo

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2

    thats great Sally, thank you sooo much again, all i could picture was my husband crawling through here, hehe, but now i can see lots of little cratures making it their home and secret place, xxx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Laura, Loved your photo…all I could picture were all kinds of little
    creatures crawling, sliding and crawling around…Thank you so much..poem was fun to write..Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar replied

    Laura, Loved your photo…all I could picture were all kinds of little
    creatures crawling, sliding and crawling around…Thank you so much..poem was fun to write..Sally xxoo

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Great Sally. Goes well with the pic.

  • Sally Omar replied

    Sharon, Thank you so much…Laura’s picture was really great…
    pictured those crawly little creatures… Sally xxoo

  • Angela Harburn

    Angela Harburn

    Fantastic dear Sally – great description of strange creatures living in this Secret Place – love the image too! xxx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Angela, Thank you so much..Laura’s picture just explained it..I could
    picture them under the rocks…not showing themselves..but being
    there…Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar replied

    Angela, Thank you so much..Laura’s picture just explained it..I could
    picture them under the rocks…not showing themselves..but being
    there…Sally xxoo

  • mrscarlotta

    mrscarlotta

    Brilliant on both sides, love this one Sally, and the shot is fantastic Laura xx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Carlotta, Thank you so much..Loved pic and loved writing this poem..
    Sally xxoo

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