CALEB & CHARLOTTE
SharonD and I wrote this poem and SharonD did the artwork..it was the first time on
RB that I had ever collaborated on a poem and it was great fun..Sharon and I intend
to do others..Thank you so much Sharon..
Please check out my friend SharonD’s other artwork & writings on the RB
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WMGCaleb was in the field
The fog so thick he could barely see
Charlotte riding her stallion
This made her feel free
Caleb thought he heard something
It sounded like a song
Greensleeves..that was it
But he thought..perhaps he was wrong
Charlotte rode slowly
Barely could she see
Not at all minding
Singing a melody
She passed Caleb..and stopped
She saw him standing there
Being surprised at first
By his beautiful blond hair
As their eyes met
A smile covered his face
He had never seen someone
Riding a horse..dressed in lace
Charlotte didn’t believe
In love at first sight
Until she saw him
Her heart leapt in flight
She felt stirrings
As she’d never known before
The feeling of excitement
Shaking her to the core
Caleb was shocked at first
Thinking he’d seen a ghost
As he gazed upon her beauty
He knew he desired her the most
She parted her lips
Said “Good Morning, sir”
And then Caleb knew
His dream woman was her
Charlotte turned her stallion
Disappearing from sight
Caleb called out to her
His voice feeling tight
He felt so lost
Feeling such great pain
Till her heard her voice
Calling…”We’ll meet again.”
He thought of her
And thoughts remained
After meeting her
He was never the same
Caleb looked all over town
But could not find
Beautiful Charlotte
She was always on his mind
One day again in the fog
He heard a sound
It was Charlotte
When he turned around
She giggled
And he laughed with glee
He was thrilled
Charlotte he did see
He grabbed her hand
He held her near
She felt so warm
And in no fear
Caleb told her of his love
And how he must
Marry her soon
Charlotte did blush
She cried as she said “No
I am not really here
Although you see me
I am not of this world, dear”
Many years before
In the fog
Her horse threw her
When he tripped on a log
They both died
Face to face
And come back
To ride in this place
Poor Caleb
Love not attained
In the fog
He just remained
Norah
:) very romantic
Sharon and Sally nice duet !
Sally Omar replied
Norah, Thank you so much..I had never collaborated on a poem
on RB before and this was very interesting because it started out
with just a picture of fog and ended up with a romantic story.. Sharon
did the pic to match our poem..Sally xxoo
hilarydougill
Beautiful romantic and heartbreaking, beautifully written and Sharons pic is absolutely wonderful and they go so well together, you told a lovely story in your poem, Wonderful, congratulations both of you.
Sally Omar replied
Hilary, Thank you so much..I had suggested to Sharon that we write
a poem together and it started out with a pic she had put in called
Fog, No Water..and it ended up here…she is so very talented and
it was great fun writing the poem together and seeing where it
ended..Sally xxoo
Dawnsky2
oh thats beautiful, and such a twist at the end, which is so sad, a great job to the both of you, well done indeed…..........x
Sally Omar replied
Laura, Thank you so much..we started the poem with just a picture of
fog and together we wrote the poem which ended up romantic and
Sharon then did this amazing pic…she is so very talented…and it
was so much fun….Sally xxoo
mlgkats
yea look who the romantic writer is :), this is awesome , and well done goes great with the photo , excellent from both of you
Sally Omar
Mel, It was really fun writing together and seeing where the poem would go…loved doing it
and yes I think both Sharon and I are definitely romantics…Thank you so much…Sally xxoo
Angela Harburn
Beautiful, romantic and tragic – all the elements of a fabulous love story – wonderful collaboration my friend! xxx
SharonD
I’m really pleased at how this turned out Sally. We rock. LOL..