LITTLE RAVEN HEAD GIRL
Thank you, Patricia!!!
Please check out my friend, Patricia Anne McCarty’s other awesome artwork on RB
Little Raven Head Girl
Your life in a whirl
You’ve met your first love
He came on the wings of a dove
Gypsy in your heart
You knew from the start
A spell can be cast on him
The handsome gypsy without sin
Setting you full of gypsy desire
Only he can put out the fire
He saw your magical dance
And then the romance
Until the fire is extinguished
And he is relinquished
Onto your next town
You will look around
For a man who can ignite
Your fire just right
Only seventeen
The true queen
Of love and romance
And the gypsy dance
LITTLE RAVEN HEAD GIRL
hilarydougill
Beautiful Sal, great storyline, wonderful imagery. (I know that sounds silly about a poem, but I can picture the stories if they are written well, so they are visual)
Sally Omar replied
Hilary, Thank you so much…and I also can picture the people in
stories when I read them..the inspiration was Patricia’s artwork..
I wanted her to read it first..since we have just started collaborating..
Sally xxoo
Roger Sampson
In my mind, she gets her man – I picture her with curls with a cute face, and a bit of a wild streak.
Do me a favor Sally, give her my phone number!! =)
Rog
Sally Omar replied
Rog, Patricia’s artwork..my inspiration..and you hit the nail on
the head curls..cute face..Thank you so much..Sally xxoo
mlgkats
cool i can see this while i read and feel the feelings as well this is what makes your writing amazing
Sally Omar replied
Mel, Thank you so much..I loved writing this..loved Patricia’s artwork.
Sally xxoo
Angela Harburn
Beautiful little gypsy girl with fire in her soul and her free spirit full of passion. Just wonderfully visual dear Sally! xxx
Sally Omar replied
Angela, Thank you so much..gypsy definitely have fire within their
souls..Sally xxoo
Patricia Anne ...
Lovely Worda, I can see her dancing and waiting with wanting eyes :)
Sally Omar replied
Patricia, I am so happy you liked this..I didn’t reply to comments until
artwork was up so everyone could see the beauty of the Raven
Head Girl..Thank you so much..Sally xxoo
carlotta peacock
Love this gorgeous, you are so talented my dear sister legsxx
Sally Omar replied
Carlotta, sister dear, thank you so much..you are so kind..I just
loved Patricia’s awesome artwork .. the poem then came so
easily…Sally xxoo
Mia1
WONDERFUL…...
Sally Omar replied
Mia, Thank you so much…I just loved the artwork and the poem
really just flowed…Sally xxoo
Metamorphosis
awesome.. just awesome Sally… & the artwork is brilliant! xo
Sally Omar replied
Bernadette, Thank you so much.. I just loved the artwork..what a
beautiful girl…so easy to write about…Sally xxoo