WAITING

Sally Omar
Author: Sally Omar
Word Count: 153
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WAITING

Donna, Your photo Waiting brought about my poem
Please check out my friend Donna’s (hickerson) other awesome artwork & writings on the RB

I worked today and am really tired
Starting to feel very wired
Waiting for the bus an hour or more
Afraid of my wife when I walk in the door
She’ll accuse me of going to the bar
The bus ride isn’t very far
The little lady never believes an excuse
She’s turning into a recluse
Not going out very much
When I come home she makes a fuss
I’m late almost every night
Of course, there’s usually a fight
She yells and screams and throws out my dinner
I just so sick of this, I’m never a winner
So here I wait nervous as can be
Waiting for the bus, let me see
The bus isn’t coming, think I’ll walk
I’m so tired, I know she’ll balk
I think I’ll start roller skating
I can’t take all this WAITING

  • hickerson

    hickerson

    love the roller skating part!!!! great poem

  • Sally Omar replied

    Donna, Thank you so much..so glad you liked poem…I just started
    writing and by the time I got to the end I figured roller skates were
    a good idea for him..Sally xxoo

  • Sally Omar replied

    Donna, Thank you so much..so glad you liked poem…I just started
    writing and by the time I got to the end I figured roller skates were
    a good idea for him..Sally xxoo

  • Dawnsky2

    Dawnsky2

    poor bloke,,, excellent writing Sally :0)

  • Mia1

    Mia1

    That is awesome. I would love to see the guys remarks about this. Great poem

  • Sally Omar replied

    Mia, Thank you so much..Notice no men reading or commenting..
    hmmmmmmmmmthink they don’t want to answer this one…
    Sally xxoo

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Poor man Sally.LOL. Now you’d better write one for his wife.

  • Sally Omar replied

    Sharon, Thank you so much..what a great idea..Sally xxoo

  • Angela Harburn

    Angela Harburn

    Great work ladies – poor man – not much incentive to go home! xxx

  • Sally Omar replied

    Angela, He should have gone to the bar..she would yell at him
    anyway…Thank you so much..SAlly xxoo

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