Evening Quiet

tuffcookie
Author: tuffcookie
Word Count: 227
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Evening Quiet

The sun begins its descent
The shadows slowly lengthen
children head for home as the streetlights flicker on.

Voices alter their octive from a loud cry to a hushed tone
no one wanting to break the sacred aura of evening.
Children giggle in hushed tones, parents quietly settle little ones in for the night

A breeze begins to stir, the sun moves lower in the sky, casting its last warm rays upon a sleepy world.

We settle in to our favorite spots, a couch, a chair, a footstool ,propping up our feet
Some sit back in a warm circle around deck tables, candles flicker in the on coming moonlight.
We aimlessly swat away an evening insect,
tones are hushed, our minds think back to the hard work of the day, muscles relax
we think ” a good job was done today by all”

Glasses are lifted, whispered toasts are given
smiles brighten the fading light, accepting the evening darkeness as we relax
and enjoy a moment of peace in what was a hectic day.

Tomorrow is far away, as we embrace an evening of calm, with friends family and loved ones

Tomorrow brings a new day, new schedules, new important items that must be done, but for the moment we relax, accept the accending evening and smile with a feeling of accomplishment.

( in response to shilo’s Night )

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    ohh I like this alot! swatting away at insects and lifting glasses around the deck. nice touch:) thanks tc, this is sweet

  • tuffcookie replied

    lol your welcome hun. went on how i’ve spent more than a few summer evenings lol

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    as we all have! man the bugs in new jersey and florida were HORRID. I had so many insect bites I wont tell you what my legs looked like!! But in the Colorado mountains, there are NO bugs!!!

    and they all said HALLELUJAH!! LOL

  • tuffcookie replied

    lmao oh i know hun alta has some really nasty insects that of course love to bite me lol.. ughI dread it. yaaaay!! not bugs for shilo!!!!! yipeeee.. gets up and does alittle happy dance… lmao they aren’t bad here. the odd one, this year seems to be alittle worse though

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    Very true to a summer evening

  • tuffcookie replied

    thanks hun. reminds me of a few summer evenings we’ve spent together lol

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    Ive been up here for 3 yrs now and I have probably seen 5 spiders and 2 mosquitos. I can pretty much handle that kind of insect population! :0)

  • tuffcookie replied

    lmao seriously?? I wish lol. we have tons of spiders here..ewww totally creep me out lol

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    you wanna hear eewwwww? in florida they have this spider that crawls like any ol spider, but it can STAND UP, I kid you not, and it casts a shadow across the floor! now maybe its just me, but any time a spider can CAST a shadow? its time to friggen leave!!!! LOL

  • tuffcookie replied

    ewwww thats so gross!!!!! thats one big freaking spider!! sounds like the bird spider that jumped at me. i kid you not.. this thing was bigger than my open hand and was hairy!! They actually hunt birds. it jumped over 6 feet and barely missed me. i screamed at the top of my lungs and promptly hit it about ten times with the business end of a shovel before it finally died! blaahhh

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    speaking of tiny invaders, whats up with the house mouse?

  • webbie

    webbie

    Great job…and so peaceful…love this tuff :)

  • tuffcookie replied

    thanks webbie :) shilo requested that i write it

  • Glen Allen

    Glen Allen

    Excellent description of balmy evenings. Great talent.

  • tuffcookie replied

    why thank ya Glen. not only can i take pics.. but i am good with words as well. lmao only kidding. glad you like it

  • Nukee

    Nukee

    Eloquently stated….thanks!! 8-)

  • tuffcookie replied

    Why thank you my friend!! I’m glad you enjoyed it

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    love this one tuffie … must be soon moving time …

  • tuffcookie replied

    ten days snappy. glad you liked it

  • dpennyor

    dpennyor

    the more I look around your work the more I see stuff I love!! sounds like a wonderful summer evening sitting around after the day is done. gorgeous my dear

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