Raining Tears

tuffcookie
Author: tuffcookie
Word Count: 177
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Raining Tears

The rain gently falls, doing its pitter patter dance upon my window
the sky is dark and dreary
The heavens have opened and released its tears

Standing surrounded by warmth and protected from the heavenly rain
Within my protected bubble the skys are grey, with a hint of sunlight
the inward skys begin to weigh down with unshed rain drops
the clouds crack slightly, the first drop slowly trickles down
Sliding down my cheek, washing gentle satiny skin on its descent

the rain drop catches, hangs momentarily, then continues its descent
Another is released, faltering on an eyelash, then dropping
another and another fall. these rain drops cannot be held back
They cleanse as they fall.
washing away the pain, and the loss

Cleansing, comforting are these rain drops
a hint of salt touches my liips, i taste it, refusing to withhold the rain drops

Rain drops fall from the heavens, pitter pattering on my window
Rain drops fall within my safe heaven
washing, cleansing, uplifting
Rain drops are falling and i’m dancing in the rain

  • rojaburbuja

    rojaburbuja

    ahhhhhhhhh how simply beautiful and well written Kellie pretty, lovely, lady :-)

  • tuffcookie replied

    thanks so much hun. again written from the heart :)

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    magical

  • tuffcookie replied

    Thanks snappy written from the heart.. told you i was emotional lol

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    softie

  • tuffcookie replied

    oh yeah lol just a big softie

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    tc, this is beautifully done, and wonderfully from your heart. excellent writing sweetie:)

  • tuffcookie replied

    thanks honey.. had a bit of an emotional day :)

  • webbie

    webbie

    So beautifully saied sad but so true tear wash away all our fears and pains:)

  • tuffcookie replied

    yes they do have a way of doing that :) thanks webbie

  • TFFDavid

    TFFDavid

    You really have no idea how I am feeling sitting here reading this magnificent writing.

    To have a clue please click the link (have your volume turned up and listen) thanks.

    click click

  • tuffcookie replied

    oh man now i’m in tears! thank you for sharing that with me and i am so very sorry for your loss. Being a mother i cannot fathom the pain you must feel. I don’t know if i could cope with losing my beloved angel. I am very glad that you like my writing though. each peice is heart felt and has memories with it

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