Sword Tanka

Sword TankaLong thoughts are brittleshort thrusts are precise and truemy mind is sharpestwithin the control of fearand without the thought of control

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Humor me here, I think tanka is 5-7-5-7-7 lol

Comments

  • Christie  Moses
    Christie Mosesalmost 5 years ago

    Yep you got it right :)) Nice job Bill :)) xoxo

  • Just experimenting C :)

    – bill bell

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockalmost 5 years ago

    This is lovely brother Bill.

  • Thanks trench :) thinking shorter… lol

    – bill bell

  • JRGarland
    JRGarlandalmost 5 years ago

    Perfect Tanka. I love how you put it together so precisely. Well done.

  • Thanks JR :) I was afraid I got it wrong lol

    – bill bell

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioalmost 5 years ago

    BRILLIANT WRITING BILL!! YOU HAVE DISTILLED THE ESSENCE OF THE MARTIAL MOMENT OF PERFECT ZEN-LIKE CONTROL AND RELAXED STATE OF MIND THAT ALLOWS THE MASTER TO EXECUTE THE PERFECT BLOW!!! BRAVO BILL!!

  • Thanks Ray :))))

    – bill bell

  • Cosimo Piro
    Cosimo Piroalmost 5 years ago

    I used to play golf like this and damn good at it….until I started to think too much about the control of each swing….I think I’m on the same page here. Nice one Bill.

  • Thanks Cos :) one syllable too many at the end but I like the way it came out

    – bill bell

  • sunsette15
    sunsette15almost 5 years ago

    When there is no control, there is no boundaries

  • Thanks sunset so true :)

    – bill bell

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestalmost 5 years ago

    Frig! You got is so right Bill….the control thing always gets me some what though as sometimes I wonder if we do need to control our thoughts to allow other thoughts to bloom?

  • As long as you don’t let your emotions get too wild I think the right thoughts will come :) Maybe I was thinking of a natural control that takes over, your muse, sounds like I’m talking about the force lol.

    – bill bell

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