Humor me here, I think tanka is 5-7-5-7-7 lol
Yep you got it right :)) Nice job Bill :)) xoxo
Just experimenting C :)
This is lovely brother Bill.
Thanks trench :) thinking shorter… lol
Perfect Tanka. I love how you put it together so precisely. Well done.
Thanks JR :) I was afraid I got it wrong lol
BRILLIANT WRITING BILL!! YOU HAVE DISTILLED THE ESSENCE OF THE MARTIAL MOMENT OF PERFECT ZEN-LIKE CONTROL AND RELAXED STATE OF MIND THAT ALLOWS THE MASTER TO EXECUTE THE PERFECT BLOW!!! BRAVO BILL!!
Thanks Ray :))))
I used to play golf like this and damn good at it….until I started to think too much about the control of each swing….I think I’m on the same page here. Nice one Bill.
Thanks Cos :) one syllable too many at the end but I like the way it came out
When there is no control, there is no boundaries
Thanks sunset so true :)
Frig! You got is so right Bill….the control thing always gets me some what though as sometimes I wonder if we do need to control our thoughts to allow other thoughts to bloom?
As long as you don’t let your emotions get too wild I think the right thoughts will come :) Maybe I was thinking of a natural control that takes over, your muse, sounds like I’m talking about the force lol.
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