Today I stilled myself
So tonight would move at a frantic pace
Today I turned off my idiot teeth
So tonight I could come to grips with this place
Today I searched for a film I’d seen
So tonight would seem like a kinetic dream
Today I misplaced a score I’d heard
So tonight I didn’t feel as absurd
Today I awoke to a crippled lung
But tonight I indulged at a frantic pace
Today I listened to what Sam Cooke had sung
But tonight his words were lost in the hours on my face.
The Idiot Teeth
Smells like a peice of cabanossi.
iofthebeholder, 2 months ago
i like the first two lines the best… such a fascinating concept
natapee, 2 months ago
a kinetic dream. like it alot.
Sebastian Pearce, 2 months ago
you creative little fuck!
the imagery rocks.
Yasemin Sumner, 2 months ago
I read and I re-read and I like it more and more, this smell of cabanossi.
Niki08, 2 months ago
Today I awoke to a crippled lung
But tonight I indulged at a frantic pace
this is really well written continue the great work.
:)
LisaG, 2 months ago
Oh yeah fucking great, there are many superb lines knitted tightly here…
Nicole Ryan, about 1 month ago
ah, the knowing better but living better philosophy ;)
you write really well