Death on the ice?

Death on the ice

put a knife through
my heart,
gently place your hand upon my thoughts
and touch my soul,
slowly twist it
until you see tomorrow
in my eyes,
release it with a vengeance,
softly close your mind,
let my blood run
upon your wasted words,
place the barrel to my temple,
put a bullet through
my brain,
let your revenge destroy me,
rid me of my pain,
I beg you,
take away my name,
save yourself,
let me hold your hand
and weep upon your lap
until the angels whisper sweet nothings
into my forlorn soul,
lead me blindly into the remnants
of the afterlife,
give me time
before you release me into
the unknown,
humanity has left me behind
once again
to mend the cracks in my death
before I go,
for I need not answer to the
no more,
the dead stand firmly by my side,
as I leave the lies and truth
before I place
upon your grave,
red roses
soaked in the blood
of my

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a tribute to all those that have lost their lifes on the ice flows of the north atlantic………..
simple man …simple words…simple thoughts…


  • Donna19
    Donna19over 1 year ago

    Amazing work Rocketman. Wow! Such creativity I don’t know where to start! Very powerful work.

  • thank you Donna…

    – Rocky Loder

  • CanyonWind
  • thank you PoPs…

    – Rocky Loder

  • CanyonWind
    CanyonWindover 1 year ago

  • thank you PoPs…truly appreciated….

    – Rocky Loder

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 1 year ago

    Well, this is me on darker days, and believe me there are many. Brilliant, I wish I wrote it. xoxoxoxox

  • thank you shar….

    – Rocky Loder

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderover 1 year ago

    Rocky, I can’t tell you how much I can relate to this wonderful write. Such a soulful outpouring my friend.

  • thank you Tony…hope all is well with you….

    – Rocky Loder

  • Teacup
    Teacupover 1 year ago

    I beg you,
    take away my name,
    these words grabbed me and dragged me back again and again… amazing write… x

  • thank you Teacup…appreciated….

    – Rocky Loder

  • Evita
    Evitaover 1 year ago

    Excellent work…. Congratulations 2nd Runner-Up !
    Editors Weekly Choice Ending January 20th, 2013
    The World As We See It , or as we missed it.Group

  • thank you Evita…

    – Rocky Loder

  • ╰⊰✿ℒᵒᶹᵉ Bonita✿⊱╮ Lalonde✿⊱╮

    ☻/ღ˚ •。* ♥ ˚ ˚✰˚ ˛★* 。 ღ˛° 。* °♥ ˚ • ★ ˚ .ღ 。
    /▌˛˚ღ •˚ ˚…just sprinkling a little Love on your page. ~♥~˚ ✰* ★
    / \ ˚. ★ ˛ ˚♥ ✰。˚ ˚ღ。* ˛˚ ♥ 。✰˚* ˚ ★ღ Congratulations on your feature wonderfuly written and expressed a fav hugs.

  • thank you Bonita….appreciated….

    – Rocky Loder

  • SummerJade
    SummerJadeover 1 year ago

    Yes, Nature can be very cruel and destructive, so sad!
    Congratulations on your special features!! ☺♥♥

  • thank you Summer Jade…so true…appreciated….

    – Rocky Loder

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooover 1 year ago

    amazing write

  • thank you Boo…

    – Rocky Loder

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