pancake serenade

Rosebuds of bliss,
So milky white,
You engorge my thoughts,
Entice my mind,
How I yearn to introduce you to my morning,
As i drink the rising sun,
You ohhhhhh so compliment,
The sweetness by your side,
Oh the joy of it all,
I’m so overwhelmed,
As I gaze upon your perfect roundness,
So tender,
So soft and fluffy,
To my gentle touch,
A tear of joy silently rolls down my cheek,
What is this object in my hand?
Waiting for me to dress you,
And undress you again,
As I smother you in affection,
Licking my lips in anticipation,
Ohhhhhhh so heavenly,
An angel pours the nectar of sustenance into my cup,
I thank her,
And pour the rest of my maple syrup,
Upon my flapjacks…

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  • JRGarland
    JRGarlandalmost 4 years ago

    LOL Now that’s enjoyment!! Love it!!

  • thank you sir…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • Arcadia Tempest
    Arcadia Tempestalmost 4 years ago

    Hi Rocky
    I am so not letting anyone here read this cos for sure it will get that sweet monster loose in the house!…. I am not making flapjacks for breakfast!
    I eat far to many with maple syrup and regret my gluttony!

  • maple syrup could pretty much make anything taste great,,,thanks for the comment…

    – Rocky Loder

  • sandra .
    sandra .almost 4 years ago

    “How I yearn to introduce you to my morning,
    As i drink the rising sun,”
    What a ‘tasty’ read Rocky, enjoy…oh and pass the maple syrup :)
    sandra x

  • thank you …what a treat that would be …for me…always appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • ronholiday
    ronholidayalmost 4 years ago

    Fine writing, troader! Descriptive & inviting.. i love pancakes & maple syrup

  • thank you…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • YakusokuNono
    YakusokuNonoalmost 4 years ago

    hahahahaha…. nice. But, what a way to describe your breakfast! Awesome.

  • thank you…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • Melodyone
    Melodyonealmost 4 years ago

    Mmm…luscious anticipation. An enticingly delicious write! :)

  • thank you…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • BiographyofRed8
    BiographyofRed8almost 4 years ago

    great metaphor, the mixing of two together, all the ingredients, nice work dude

  • thank you…much appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • LisaMM
    LisaMMalmost 4 years ago

    Mmmmmm, what a delicious piece of writing Rocky, leaves me licking my lips and wanting more.

  • thank you…Lisa..maple syrup truly is mouth watering…truly appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • AnniG
    AnniGalmost 4 years ago

    LOL…must be THE most glorious, sensuous pancake feast EVER! You had my mind dancing off on a totally different tangent…very sneaky, but oh so heavenly in wicked deliciousness! One yummy write, Rocky!! :-)

  • thank you so much…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • trish725
    trish725almost 4 years ago

  • thank you… is an honor…greatly appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

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