Waiting at the train track emptying my mind

Liddle beet cole tudey,
The air sits silently,
Dangling on puppet strings,
The frost blocks my view,
Bites my nose,
Nips my toes,
Fogs my mind,
Sublime,
As I hurry into today,
Leaving nothing behind only time,
And the misery of tomorrow,
A train blocks my way,
Another delay as I try to rid myself,
Of the words of yesterday,
The smell of the past haunts me,
As I wait in limbo,
Anticipating the end of my future,
As I dwell on the past,
I catch a glimpse,
Of an empty trash bin in a darkened alley,
Green fluorescent letters,
Leer back at me,
Shouting, screaming, yelling,
Empty bin,Empty bin,Empty bin,
I can’t resist,
So I tell it my life story,
I can hear it giggling
As I wait for the trash man,
To take my past to a better place,
Somewhere within the distance of here and there,
The morning moon yawns,
As the sweet smell of tangerines,
Invokes memories of yesteryear,
Fucking with my mind,
A good mind fuck,
Never hurt anybody,
Fuck away,Fuck away,Fuck away,
Carrying me away,
To what I hoped would be better days,
Lost in time,
Letting go of my mind,
Savoring,
Every second,
An eternity,
Just a fantasy,
Blissful daydream,
Maybe,
She was so young,
Forever young,
Ageless in my eye,
Seductively undressing,
Skin so soft,
My weathered grained hands,
Hesitant,
Soothing my soul,
So beautiful,
I kissed her tenderly,
She sighed,
I blushed,
I traced her luscious lips,
With my fingertips,
I sighed,
She blushed,
I brushed a tear from her cheek,
And died a thousand deaths,
I held her ohhhhhhhh sooooooooo tight,
Not wanting to let go,
Overflowing with her beauty,
Admiring the intoxicating,
Wondrous beauty,
Of my middle age Angel,
Branded onto my soul,
Until fucking eternity,
CLANG,clang,Clang,clang……………………….

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Comments

  • annieannie
    annieannieabout 4 years ago

    i like this immensely
    but
    cannot accept it into bloopers
    i hope a re read of the ‘rules’
    will hellp explain why
    xx annie

  • so sorry i was not thinking clearly…so glad you like it…thank you…sorry…

    – Rocky Loder

  • LisaMM
    LisaMMabout 4 years ago

    Rocky, this is an amazing piece of writing. So emotive..I feel this deeply. Your writing is going from strength to strength. Love it.

  • thank you…Lisa…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • JRGarland
    JRGarlandabout 4 years ago

    I love the changing in your thoughts and how they move from one point to the next. Awesome write!!

  • thank you kindly…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • sandra22
    sandra22about 4 years ago

    Rocky… a clever metaphor and brilliant read
    “I can’t resist,
    So I tell it my life story,”
    Gosh this is an excellent read sir :))
    love sandra

  • thank you so much…sandra….always appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • G .
    G .about 4 years ago

    Truly enjoyed this piece Rocky.. your work is always so good!

  • thank you,such a kind compliment…much appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • acquaridan
    acquaridanabout 4 years ago

    Nothing like a good mind fuck matey Such a brilliant write Troader can’t help but be drawn into the amazing imagery you create as I follow your thoughts from start to finish in each piece.. Really love your writing!!

  • thank you…appreciate your comments and insight…

    – Rocky Loder

  • SilentScreamer
    SilentScreamerabout 4 years ago

    A really great mindfuck … in fact, an excellent one. I liked it, a lot!

  • thank you so much…appreciated…

    – Rocky Loder

  • warmsoul
    warmsoulabout 4 years ago

    Awsome writing troader!

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