The Sun and the Moon
a poem written 12 years ago. I have a stack…. made more poigniant by the fact I’m playing the leading role in Miss Saigon which opens next week. Little did I know I’d be singing a song titled, “The Sun and the Moon” 12 years later.
The Sun and the Moon belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry ! and The beauty of poetryI am your Sun
Each morning I shall awaken you
With a gentle kiss of light
Shine a path for you
To guide you safely through your day
Until I fade gently beyond the horizon
At night, I am your Moon
Who lights the stars that spell out your name
When those stars fall, they are my tears from missing you
The moonbeams are my arms that will embrace you
Protect you until my sun returns again
Nicolette Thain
so beautiful Dean, luv it :)
Mari1980
Who lights the stars that spell out your name
Beautiful line! love how it all flows.
great write. —mari
Matt Roberts
Cool.
Michele Markley
Beautifully written! :-)
gemini63
So romantic :)
Shelly Hiebert
Sighhhhhhh…................ :) So not only are you a darn good photographer, but you can put a pretty mean pen to paper as well! This is so tender and beautiful and romantic Dean. You had me at I :) Love it and a total favourite :)
Dean Mullin replied
Thanks Shelly – thought you might like it… we open in less than a week… all going well – but now the mayhem, long nights and the fun stuff begins
jacqleen
wowwwwwwwwwww….............a very GENTLE, Heartfelt and ROMANTIC writing….............!
And all I know, If I had a SUN and a MOON like you….............I’d want to Live Forever :))))
Dean Mullin replied
Thank you jacqleen – I had a sneaky at your art… wow mindblowing :o) it’s simply stunning… Thanks for your comments – made me smile. I’ll probably be putting more up here in the coming days/weeks when i get a chance
happyfeet5
Wow. This is so beautiful and romantic. I agree with Shelly and jacqleen, sighhhhhhhh…......
And if I had a Sun and A moon like you….......................I don’t have a Sun, nor Moon, not even a tiny shiny little star. Mine likes haikus and only because they are short, not really because he thinks they are beautiful.
W. J. St. Chri...
~ sigh ~ I want that . . .
Thanks for sharing, Dean, and all the best with your Miss Saigon run. How amazing for you!
Dean Mullin replied
thank you – yes – the season of Miss Saigon will go well – and I’ll post up the review of the show hopefully for you all to read
Michele Markley
Christie Moses
Oh this is so gentle and soft. What a beautiful romantic write and every ladies dream xxo
saraheyes
Beautiful poem, I just love it!
silvercircles
Beautiful and so sweet. = )
IzzyGumbo 23 days ago
mmm… I love this :) Beautiful and tender … very sweet.
Natalie Jay 23 days ago
Beautifully written =]