No Notion

Thomas Josiah Chappelle

I know not what-
What I shall think or write?
My mind is hazy;
Could be lazy.
A need to show might;
It’s out of sight –
Away from the lite
Weighed d’n by inertia,
As if I’ve seen Minerva.
My stamina seems abated –
Like cheese, that’s been grated!
If I am nagged or berated -
For seeming to be fated
To move like molasses;
Ev’n a snail passes!
Forgive me my trespasses;
Ne’er be rich as Onassis!
Need motion to my locomotion –
Where to get it? – no notion!

No Notion

What to write when writing is nigh out of question

No Notion belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Safe Haven and WMG
  • lynauklet

    lynauklet, 9 months ago

    The rhyme scheme and meter is wacked.

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies, 9 months ago

    nice one well done

  • Stanz .

    Stanz ., 9 months ago

    I agree with lynauklet… it seems like you have good ideas, but your rhyming is juvenile and your diction is awkward. If anything though, you need to work on flow.

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