Springtime Haiku

Thomas Simunsen
Author: Thomas Simunsen
Word Count: 10
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Springtime Haiku

This is the first time I have done one of these.
Thank you Jane (One perfectkiss) for the inspiration.
If I’ve got it wrong let me know!

Melting winter snow
Feeding springtime coloured blooms
Nature wakens new

  • davedaniels

    davedaniels

    i really like this I love the haiku form simple and elegant

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you David I appreciate you stopping by.
    It’s my first attempt and I love these.
    Hopefully more to follow in time

  • janeymac

    janeymac

    lovely it says so much in so few words Tom!!!!

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    Thank you Jane, these are such a challenge lol I love them.
    I was inspired by haiku one written by Oneperfectkiss.
    So I thought I would try.

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    Beautiful! Well done Tom!! xxx

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you so much for the inspiration. XX

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    Yes love this

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you for stopping by I really do appreciate it.

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    anytime..love your poetic spin

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    feel free to use any of my work as inspiration

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    Lovely Tom, very nice work !! XX
    Becca

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you, I am pleased with it.

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    Thank-you for your kind offering

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    perfect !

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you kind Sir, I am happy as always to have your smiling face on my page :-)

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Very very pretty.

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    thank you for stopping by. As pointed out I didn’t quite nail this one but will on the next lol. thanks for your comments

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    How beautiful Tom, you are a gorgeous writer

  • Thomas Simunsen replied

    blush I wish I could write half as well as you take photos. Thank you for your wonderful comment

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