I am always surprised to find this message. In all my moderation I have never used it. That is because I do not feel, even though I have been involved, actively, with photography and the arts for over fifty years, that I can make that comment about someone else’s work.Perhaps if we were in a critique then we could discuss such things but not in this situation. This image is part of a book where each image of the park is manipulated to emphasize the color combined with form and someone static participants. If you don’t like it that is fine, but don’t tell me to improve it.
“Water Park #70” was not accepted into Nikon fun group
The reason was: We think elements of it could be improved. These may be issues with composition or framing, excessive noise or soft focus, or excessive post-production. However, we encourage you to contribute other work to the group.