Beyond bone and plastic
metal case and concrete floor
over balconies and bridges
bypass gate and wooden door
beneath the streams and oceans
cross countries small and large
earth vibrates feel the charge
Quell all inner thoughts
balance the spirit
reject the merit
close your eyes and see
what happens to you
happens to me
stop searching and find
detox the mind
For the truth
is closer than
we think
red addiction, 4 months ago
you got it!! Thanks for sharing!
William Jackso..., 4 months ago
Yeppers!
t1nyskert, 4 months ago
a man of many talents…
butchart, 4 months ago
i love seeing this theme echo it’s way across the bubble… the reverbs are gaining in power
reflector, 4 months ago
Very concise and very introspectively written. Deep truth, well rendered.
atomikboy, 4 months ago
Blunt the senses,resolve the complications!!!........your a Taoist.
bites, 4 months ago
Brilliant!
JohnScott, 4 months ago
oh this is Tinfoil hat society stuff mate, join me come the tin hat shop. lol true though
Arisephoenix, 4 months ago
Love it.
bodymechanic, 4 months ago
nice writting- i thinks agents scully and mulder should come and see u!! lol
Jboo09, 3 months ago
Amazing work, simple and true. I love this!!! You’re absolutely right… some people search their whole lives to find the “truth” only to discover it was right under their noses all along.
WoodyWood, 3 months ago
Humor.
darkestartist, about 1 month ago
beautiful in its truth. nice work.
RossBrodie, about 1 month ago
“balance the spirit
reject the merit
“
i liked this line, wish more Rbubblers could reject the sychopanty merit they get. anyway, its one of those simple, easy poems that quickly spurs you away, and it has a purity of intent and execution. no pretension. v.satisfying
MelanieSpeaks, 20 days ago
Love this