Beyond bone and plastic
metal case and concrete floor
over balconies and bridges
bypass gate and wooden door
beneath the streams and oceans
cross countries small and large
earth vibrates feel the charge
Quell all inner thoughts
balance the spirit
reject the merit
close your eyes and see
what happens to you
happens to me
stop searching and find
detox the mind
For the truth
is closer than
we think
red addiction
you got it!! Thanks for sharing!
William Jackso...
Yeppers!
t1nyskert
a man of many talents…
butchart
i love seeing this theme echo it’s way across the bubble… the reverbs are gaining in power
reflector
Very concise and very introspectively written. Deep truth, well rendered.
atomikboy
Blunt the senses,resolve the complications!!!........your a Taoist.
bites
Brilliant!
JohnScott
oh this is Tinfoil hat society stuff mate, join me come the tin hat shop. lol true though
Arisephoenix
Love it.
bodymechanic
nice writting- i thinks agents scully and mulder should come and see u!! lol
Jboo09
Amazing work, simple and true. I love this!!! You’re absolutely right… some people search their whole lives to find the “truth” only to discover it was right under their noses all along.
WoodyWood
Humor.
darkestartist
beautiful in its truth. nice work.
RossBrodie
“balance the spirit
reject the merit
“
i liked this line, wish more Rbubblers could reject the sychopanty merit they get. anyway, its one of those simple, easy poems that quickly spurs you away, and it has a purity of intent and execution. no pretension. v.satisfying
MelanieSpeaks
Love this
AmandaGWright
I like this piece very much, is different from your other written works in tine but not in quality…your writing is stellar.
ToastedGhost replied
Thank you so much