REVOLUTION?

ToastedGhost
Author: ToastedGhost
Word Count: 215
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REVOLUTION?

Just me having a rant!

REVOLUTION? belongs to the following groups:

DaDa Land and Something To Say

(This a rant and must be read with rage! (Written in the UK about the UK))

No revolution sparkle
the dried up embers of enthusiasm
stick like shit to a blanket
chocking all reason
slaying imagination in its wake
Universities, once the hot bed of political unrest
now march to the tune of the fat cats
Training executives
to become corporate killers
Reality plays virtual
as the ghost of ideology
rattle down poll station corridors
whilst sofas
slowly suck the life force
from couch potato voyeurs
mesmerized by the black box
black hole
of all consuming consciousness
as they vote in their millions
to evict some previously unknown halfwit
from the BIG BROTHER HOUSE
All gloss and no content
yet were content
content to live in a country where 40,000 homeless people walk the streets
content to live in a country where 6,300 people take their own lives each year
content to live in a country where 6,00 women are raped
and over 850 people are murdered each year?
You still content?
Hear my disent
but just to make yer feel secure
or rattle your paranioa
just remember this
we are constantly being recorded by over 300 cameras per day
At home
At work
At play
Big Brother is watching you!

  • darkestartist

    darkestartist

    fantastic paradoxical use of content! i, too, am angered by the apathy and disgusted with the masses…and the fear of the black van no longer keeps me quiet. keep writing and getting out there!

  • Romo

    Romo

    Excellent….this is not just happening in the UK, it is happening everywhere…the US for one….Bravo for writing this rant…....Hugs:)

  • butchart

    butchart

    i believe thre is the beginning of a revolution out there.. small for now… but it is found in places like this.. by artists… by words like this…. the next big social revolution can be spurred by insightful, enlightened creative people if we keep on keepin on…............ b

  • Christopher Birtwistle-Smith

    Christopher Bi...

    wow tg this is intense – good rant, but unfortunately that rage is all too easily ignored its not sexy. I read somewhere that if you chuck a frog in water it wont notice if you turn up the heat until it boils. well the water surrounding western society is boiling now!!!! we have let that water get the better of us those unreality shows you speak of are a symptom, working in social services you get to see life through a warts and all lens but thats not the norm the unreality of big brother is the new reality – does that make sense lol…. c xx

  • velveteagle

    velveteagle

    Escaping Reality is their drug of choice. Big Brother gives it away free at first. Find a friend in me, be what we want you to be. But no longer Free. It was drugs they used in the past. Now it’s Corporate thugs who control you ass.

  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill

    Watch your blood pressure sweetheart, I was filling in someones form for them for their pension, and it stated ‘If English is not your first language, ask for help’. Why? Why are we paying pensions to someone who obviously hasn’t worked here because they don’t speak the language, and lets be honest if you cannot speak the language you cannot do much, you cannot understand orders. haha. Great insight into our political occurance, I could add a lot more to it. haha. hugsxxx

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Well said. Democracy has stagnated and needs to evolve. Apathy seems to be the vote of the day. Well under 20% of voters belong to a political party, so it is no wonder that the minority rule.

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    Rant on my brother, sounds familiar to US stats, thoughts, behaviors…
    It is so time for “R”evolution!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    yes….we sure are being watched…..same shit here in the us as i am sure u realize….so this one hits i think most of the world …. excellent work as only an artist like u could do

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Yeeeeees…
    In the name of what?
    With whose permission?
    For what reasons..?
    What place of our soul must we inhabit to flight from their dark shadow?
    Are you beligerant or resistant?
    Something scapes from my senses….
    alll the time I think about things..
    coming, going…
    happening… lies and lies….
    fake lives…
    fake faces.. personalities…. words… ideas..
    we are not perfect…
    imperfection enhances harmony.
    Pessimism is the mother of optimism…
    We call raw evidences to the painful events..
    and romantic evidences to the joyful events…
    but… where is the real soul of all these events?
    Could not tell..
    but I understand your rage…
    I have recited your poem in loud voice and raging mood…
    But… here… sitting before… my Cs3 with a huge screen… and beautiful music around…. well.. this rage was a fake too…
    Rosa (keep on going. T.G.)

  • kamorphous

    kamorphous

    Absolute truth…beautifully executed.

  • charliethetramp

    charliethetramp

    but most of the camera`s don`t work
    and most of the people behind the camera`s
    don`t work either
    and tony blair has become a surrealist
    he lives in john gielgud house
    and talks to jean cocteau via an ouija board
    and cherie blair has grown a tail
    and two tales are better than one
    and education has now become a place of perception management
    sorry i have just gone into overdrive
    yes i like your poem and i basically agree with its conent

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