Mesmerized #1
First in the
Mesmerized series, Japanese Garden, Seattle WA.
Mesmerized #1 belongs to the following groups:
Abstract Realism, All Countries ~ Wetlands, Ponds, Lakes and Rivers, Landscape and Abstract Photography and Mysteries of the Common Available for sale asGreeting Cards, Matted Prints, Laminated Prints, Mounted Prints, Canvas Prints and Framed Prints


Tom Vaughan
Hi All,
Feed back requested on this. Too dark overall? Too dark at corners? More toning? Should I use a tripod next time?
Also… any suggestions for a title would be appreciated… that part of my brain isn’t working tonight.
Thanks!
Anthony Mancuso
Looks good to me Tom, the only thing I could possibly suggest is maybe bit more contrast between light and dark? I like the movement in it, gives it a mysterious look.
Nikki Trexel
i like it, but it’s so abstract it’s pretty hard to critique. if it looks good, it’s good. :) ok, that’s pretty simplistic but i do like this and as it doesn’t seem to be representational, i think it’s perfect. it reminds me of a kind of rock i used to collect called Apache Tears. it was a smooth kind of obsidian. maybe there’s a good name in there someplace? i like your image Tom!
Nikki Trexel
oh, you know what it does look like? if i’m underwater and looking through muddy water to a tree above. :)
Tom Vaughan replied
Thanks, Nikki! Apache Tears is a great name! I don’t think I want to name anything “muddy” unless its actually a picture of mud ;) Your comment also made me think of “through the looking glass”.
Miron Abramovici
I like it – very moody and mysterious. Enhance contrast and sharpening, but not too much. Are these reflections? “Clear as mud” may be a good title… I’m joking!
Tom Vaughan replied
Thanks for your thoughts (except the “clear as mud… see below). I’ll try to brighten up the background a bit and sharpen just a tad… I think that’s turned down pretty low. As far as what it is… hmm… I seem to recall a talented photographer named Miron who never likes to give out such secrets… (but yes it is a reflection).
Tom Vaughan
does anyone else see a crazed ant with a skull for a face intent upon devouring the world…or is it time for me to go to sleep?
Tom Vaughan
ok… increased the contrast and clarity a bit…
Globalphotos
Go to bed Tom …. LOL Looks like twisted veins in an eye ball through a scope to me, perhaps I need sleep too, will blame jet lag , interesting shot !!
Tom Vaughan replied
LOL…there you go… “macular disintegration”!
Globalphotos
woohoo, that’s the one !! LOL
Miron Abramovici
OOPS – guilty as charged! But I was just trying to help you with the title…
Wendy Slee
this is beautiful…i recognized it as I have several images the same of reflections in water…..it is a mysterious view of above, as if from below …..mesmerizing…..
Tom Vaughan replied
Thanks for the title :)
Norman Winkworth
I like it Tom. Well done.
Kathie Nichols
Well I think its great, you know how I love abstracts…..how about “Tree of Life”. Great shot Tom!!!
micmac
Like Anthony said maybe a little more contrast but then again this is realy cool effects ,I clearly see a beautiful tree and I like that yellowish tone,beautiful abstract ,I think it could go in that new group «realistic abstract» ..not sure of the name of the group but it’s easy to find…Gigi
ragman
I belie=ve it is fine as it is ~ it’s abstract realism ~ you don’t need a tripod; slightly more toning might work to lighten it slightly ~ or reduce the opaciity to 85%
DesImages
I think this is beautiful, and I can’t think of any way to improve it now. Although I can recognise the reflection of a tree, what appeals about it is the abstract natre of the pattern, so no, a tripod isn’t necessary. I don’t think it’s too dark either. I ratherlike the moody effect.
Joanne Bradley
Fabulous abstract Tom!
nesi
i love it! perhaps just a little more contrast but i wouldn’t bother with a tripot.
Milgate Asher
I think it is great! I’d suggest working the contrast, but i really love the image!
filthy6
I like this as is, Tom. The movement I think makes it unique and gives it a bit of mystery (and life).
RSart
I see trees, night and textures you see on some rocks.. I also wee wine and whisky. this is so beautiful
Tom Vaughan replied
I love what you see in this!