Misled
Playing with 88 words containing “LED”, while explaining the misleadings of US culture from my experiences here ;)
Misled belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Masterpieces: Literary Workshop and WMGI have not travelled the world or sailed the seven seas
Though I’ve spiraled through entangled or troubled displease
Only to be labeled being ailed or disabled with embattled dis-ease
Revealed soon, I was humbled to pledge being detailed with a deviled ease
This appealed to the auricled organ which chronicled distilled choice
What has bankrolled and channeled someone’s credentialed voice
No longer controlled by a fabled, hobbled, scheduled or idled noise
I inhaled strength and exhaled the fear in star spangled rejoice
I have assembled the mind’s chiseled thoughts to unveiled actions
Being stifled, I gambled and marveled while I smelled satisfaction
Then struggled, stumbled and trampled upon an encircled chain reaction
Soon counseled, co-counseled until compelled beyond distraction
A fledgling pedestaled on the ledge of an equaled rebelled life
I’ve quarreled, as I’m libeled for this principled so-called strife
Dulled as being led or finagled out of being pummeled with a knife
They are foiled in their stockpiled attempts expelled as a fit wife
I’m entitled now as I have fled belittled and enabled times of youth
To step past the jailed, soiled and tangled knowledge of truth
I have profiled, meddled and manhandled evidence like a sleuth
Having somewhat tattled and revealed more than a smuggled wisdom tooth
The mourning turtledove is settled beside a sandaled foot in sand
Repelled and enthralled at the once unspoiled, being imperiled land
While we worry of the dimpled, dialed and recalled to be retailed in our hand
Still puzzled as we’re panhandled by a well-oiled and fueled, youth bled stand.
©TK Rosevear 2008
Alison Pearce
Excellent and profound play on words TK!
tkrosevear replied
thanks very much sis, I do miss those prompts ;) xoxox
Alexanderargyll
great…..........read….......well wrote out Tk
tkrosevear replied
thanks very much Alexander ;) xoxox
Joyce Dickens,...
Wow Tammy, that is some awesome writing Sis…....I do so love what you can make come to life through your wonderful writings! Well done…XX JD
tkrosevear replied
I do get a bit carried away sometimes Joyce, thanks for understanding it though ;) xoxox
cherylc1
WOW~ Awesome writing my dear Sis!!
tkrosevear replied
thanks so much cheryl, my beautiful sis ;) xoxox
Erhan OZBIYIK
Wonderful thoughts as always !!!
Great Hugs :)
tkrosevear replied
thank you so much Erhan ;) xoxox
joyousmoon
Deeply touching and true words spoken clearly. I hear your voice as your spirit speaks, a spirit amid change, growth, wisdom, and new found freedoms! Love to you sis….xoxox
tkrosevear replied
thanks ever so much my dear sister, knew you would get this one ;) xoxox
Teresa P. Pelaez
Beautiful writing!!!
tkrosevear replied
thank you Teresa ;) xoxox
RosaCobos
Well…. not only you did have to ryhme the words, but find the joy of playing with them.
It is being difficult for me to grasp the contain… but is is delightful to recite it and try to follow the pattern, the drawing of the names turned into verbs, or verb turned into subjects…
I cannot tell why but when I started to read it, it came to me the young Bob Dylan. Not telling you as an appraisal but as a fact of my inner resonance.
Rosa (have a hug Tammy…)
tkrosevear replied
I will take the Dylan reference as a wonderful compliment Rosa, his songwriting has always affected me deeply ;) xoxox
RosaCobos
Oh… Tammy, I may not have grasped the whole writing but entered into the Core group and identified your poem right away… so your words must be really a magnetic strength… beleive me yes… it is a real trip with enthralling visions and different vehicles…
So good!
Rosa
tkrosevear replied
thank you so much Rosa, this means alot to me ;) xoxox
whitehawk60
Excellent work WindOwl
tkrosevear replied
thanks whitehawk, love playing with words ;) xoxox
coppertrees
Awesome work
tkrosevear replied
thanks so much sis ;) xoxox
mooner1
What wordy wizardry you produce!!! This piece took a lot of doin’ but the result is fantastic! {:{)
tkrosevear replied
thanks that’s the nicest way anyone told me how wordy I can be ;) xoxoxo
Rosalie Scanlon
Excellent Tammy
tkrosevear replied
thanks Rosalie ;) xoxox
Solomon Walker
fantastic writing, deep and profound!!
tkrosevear replied
thanks very much Solomon ;) xoxox
Carol Berliner
beeeeautiful writing!
tkrosevear replied
thanks Carol, appreciate you ;) xoxox
roy skogvold
wow
great writing.
Maybe you should turn it into a song ?
...roy
tkrosevear replied
I don’t think the singer would be too thrilled with all these words, but thanks so much Roy ;) xoxox
Christopher Bi...
tk you are an incredibly talented and easy flowing writer, this is awesome :)) x
tkrosevear replied
AW, Christopher ~ you have made my day by warming my heart and always making me smile ;) xoxox
cougarfan
Beautiful Writing Hun:))))))))xoxoxo
tkrosevear replied
thanks so much Trena, love playing with words ;) xoxox
Keith Reesor
Wonderfully written TK!! :)
tkrosevear replied
thanks Keith, was certainly a mouthful ;) xoxox
Amber Elizabet...
tkrosevear replied
WooHoo, thanks so much Amber, I am honored ;) xoxox
JRGarland
I love how you play your words and have such depth in meaning.
tkrosevear replied
thanks JR, one of my fave things to do ;) xoxox