U N T I T L E D
this is a shot that i have been expirementing with on lightroom, and i like the way it has turned out, some feedback would be nice, thankyou enjoy..
Camera: Nikon d40 – - – Lens: Nikon 55-200mmVR
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Richard Ion
Well, it is just my sort of thing Christian. As you ask(!) I may suggest a little less vignetting in the lower right-hand corner?
It is one of those photographs that does look much better when viewed ‘large’.
Fine work
Richard
Christian Hartung replied
thankyou
Anthony Mancuso
Nice work Christian, I tend to agree with Richard, just slightly less vignetting LRHC but otherwise fantastic atmosphere and tones! Very well done!
Christian Hartung replied
thankyou
Paul Manning
I like this alot ~ actually like the dark around the edges and the shiny light in the centre ~ grabbed my attention straight away ~ very cool! cheers Paul
Christian Hartung replied
thankyou
craigmason
Hi Christian – well done I’m still getting my head around lightroom (only use it to create web galleries for my wedding and portrait clients).
I agree with Richard & Anthony – less vignetting lower right corner, tones etc all work well.
Christian Hartung replied
thankyou
dvande1
Hate to sound like a broken record her, but I agree. I notice, at least on my monitor a hint of color in the clouds on the right? Just another way to look at it. In LR you could’ve brought that across the tops of the clouds. But I do like the ominous feel to it. Keep it up…i
Steven Sandner
Incredible!
mm1208
i like htis shot a lot too!
i find the dark area to the right goes well with the silhouette of the tree rich land mass, cliff or whatever u wanna call it..
if it was all cleaned up i was just one of those shots, i reckon!!
Basia McAuley
Awesome effect,, very moody,, love that sky and love South Beach! Great work!