I N > T H E < W R O N G > R O O M
This is a shot of my pop while he was in hospital he had just gone in for a bi pass and this is what he looked like right after a bit confused i think, i like the lighting in the shot, please leave some comments on how i could fix it thankyou, enjoy…
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TextureoftheSin
The light and tones are spot on. It certainly reflects how I feel when I woke up from major surgery.
You might think about cropping down the top to lose that shelf.
Christian Hartung replied
yeah when you said that it made me look at the top shelve thanks for the positive comment, appreciated.
Simon Whittaker
Excellent shot, I love ToTS work but I think leaving the shelf in gives a better sense of your Pops situation, I think it helps tell the story by saying “This man is in hospital”. The lighting is superb and whilst part of your Pops face is lost to the dark tones it probably improves the shot in a way for the rest of us. Great work mate.
Dave Hiskey
this is a great pic…love the colouring and the position of your pop..I wouldn’t do anything to it..has great feeling and a great sense of actuality..love it
Jaybe
I think the lighting is superb…..such an incredibly moving image. Hope he’s ok now…x
midzing
powerful and moving image,,,, and I hope he is ok,,,,,
Christian Hartung replied
he’s fine now thanks
Paul Manning
this is a great image, personally wouldn’t do much too it, I think you’ve done well, glad that he is OK, keep up the great work, cheers, Paul
Dragomir Vukovic
strong !
Albert Sulzer
Great image! just wanted to draw your attention to the 9-11 on the LHS, How weird is that ?
Lynn Stratton
The title and the lighting are perfect! Have you shown him this picture? It is great. :)
Christian Hartung replied
nah he actually hasnt seen it but i dont think he would like to see himself like this, thanks
richardfrank
Christian, really great image and I agree with most about keeping it the way it is. I really like you’re other pics. Cheers, Richard.
cassandralilley
great photo. it really shows a story, captured well ;]
dimsim
lovely, no change :)
Anibal
I dont think anything needs to change.. this is well done!
Elizabeth Hub...
this is a very touching shot, thank you for sharing :)
you have some great works!!!
DavidAmosPhoto...
This is a GREAT shot Christian…. the ONLY thing I would do myself is to try and open up slightly some detail on his face, only slight though. I think the lighting here REALLY suits the mood and the story. You have really captured this well. A shot that will last for ever.
Basia McAuley
This is excellent work Christian! I think the lighting is perfect for this shot,, the composition is excellent,, that top shelf must stay,,, it’s part of this story and you have captured that mood here,, the only thing I would suggest is to brighten up the light,, only a fraction on his darker eye,, to keep the shadow but define the eye,, otherwise excellent work,, hope your Pop is doing better also.
jacqleen
This Shot hits HOME for me…...I watched my dad the same way!!! I think you captured it PERFECTLY….the lighting is superb….........and I hope your dad is doing better!!!!