Night Train

thepaintedsoul

Night Train

My brother-in-law is a model train fanatic, so one Christmas I painted this for him. ANd he always kidded me that I needed to write a train song. I did, so the lyrics follow below.

Original ptg.: 16” x 20”
acrylic on canvas board

private collection

SILVER WHEELS

in these speechless crowded moments
with the words cold to the touch.
and the moonlight falls upon the night
as these blind eyes search the dark.
the roar of hidden power
heaves away against the bluff,
as it’s rocking, mocking, steel-on-steel
weaves a spell around his thoughts.

silver wheels
spinning through the night
stirring up these longings
in the hours before daylight.

on the ridge above the river,
a silhouette in fading light,
an old man remembers miles of track
and the work he’s left undone.
silver rail traces Big Muddy,
as it wanders out of sight.
the 10:05 was his to run,
so he meets her every night,

so he stands on the river bluff and watches
with a love that cannot be erased.
he waits for the train with this longing that remains
to go home.

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Night Train by thepaintedsoul
  • ellena

    ellena

    wow…no that Christmas is coming looks like Polar Express :)

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Aha. . .I love the book Polar Express. Read it to my kids over and over when they were little. : >)

  • bluerabbit

    bluerabbit

    Great work!

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Thanks blue. : >)

  • Gail Bridger

    Gail Bridger

    Gorgeous work!!!
    I bet he loved his gift!

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Hey Gail. . . it was funny. He opened the package and just didn’t say hardly anything. But then over the next year, he talked about it every time I saw him. Guess it took awhile for it to sink in. : >)

  • OurKev

    OurKev

    Magnificent artwork. Gorgeous colour and detail.

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Hey there OurKev,

    Glad you found the piece appealing. Always good to know that a painting connects. Cheers!

  • linda858100

    linda858100

    FANTASTIC I LOVE THIS

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Glad you enjoyed it Linda. So nice of you to come back by for a visit. Have a great week. Ok? Cheers!

  • Lynda Robinson

    Lynda Robinson

    Congratulations on a great piece of artwork, and for being ‘featured’!

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Thanks Lynda! Have a good week.

  • Michael A. Morrison

    Michael A. Mor...

    this is awsome…brilliant detail, mood…almost like a photographic still…love this.

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Thanks Michael. Appreciate the comment.

  • Ann  Palframan

    Ann Palframan

    Incredible image…and fantastic lyrics! I can imagine a Jethro Tull type of sound. Probably way off base!

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Sure I’m down with the Jethro Tull thing. : >) Appreciate your comment Ann. Have good one.

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    great one,cheers

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Glad you like it!

  • Cee Neuner

    Cee Neuner

    I adore trains….and your work here is just stunning.

  • thepaintedsoul replied

    Hey Cee, Thanks so much for stopping by. Glad you enjoy this painting. I enjoy seeing it now and then. Reminds me of the pleasure I had in painting this particular image. Cheers! TPS

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