Emotions running high ,feeling the weight of so many sorrows

Music in my ears as thoughts
enter inbetween the notes
high pitch low pitch.

Then the words do come with a flowing speed
of contempt and beauty,
short words ,long words,some meaningful and some are not
but for the most part
serentiy abounds as these words flow.

My muse , she has alot to say,
the wind is blowing gently by the lake
the music of the birds are now deafening
a gunshot in the background did scare them into flight.

The clouds moving slowely,then tornadoes formed and swirled in all different directions
the lightening came ,sparks the lengths of football fields
zigzag before my very eyes!

The torrential rain came pouring down but this was no
ordinary rain , for this was black , as black at soot,
darkening the whole atmosphere!

Emotions running high ,feeling the weight of so many sorrows
then it happened!

The downpour of blackrain turned into that of rainbow colors
a brightening of the sky , the earth became a multitude of vivid rainbow colors
as if the sorrows of the world
had been lifted………….

Emotions running high ,feeling the weight of so many sorrows

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Comments

  • Donna19
    Donna19almost 3 years ago

    Brit I am reading this and feeling my words coming faster and the peaking. A well done piece on your concept for sure. I enjoyed this.

  • Thank You Donna, glad you enjoyed the concept!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindalmost 3 years ago

    I am in a dark mood, so I was hoping for an intense image. lol forgive me, it was such a build up, I never expected the rainbow ending….but that is me! good thing not everyone is not like me. uplifting endings are well…inspiring. and inspiration is most definitely needed. well written Brit! XOXOXOXOXOXOOX

  • Thank You dear Shar, yep sometimes happy endings can happen!! sorry for such a late response, missed this one :)

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • sure2010
    sure2010almost 3 years ago

    Wonderful expression…I was connecting myself while reading your poetry with a visit which I made last week to a Caring Home (Ashram) for Challenged people – Emotions running high ,feeling the weight of so many sorrows

  • Thank You Sure, Yes I can see the connection between this poem and Challenged people! your comments are very much appreciated!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Arco Iris  R
    Arco Iris Ralmost 3 years ago

    Your muse did have a lot to say. She showed that from the weight of clouds you can become strong and fly higher where you can create your own uplifting colors. Very well written.

  • Thank You for your very thoughtful comments Iris, very much appreciated!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • markhadafairday
    markhadafairdayalmost 3 years ago

    wow! beautiful

  • Thank You very much Mark!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • MarieG
    MarieGalmost 3 years ago

    Love what you do with words Brit…fascinating and powerful!!!

  • Thank You so very much MarieG!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loderalmost 3 years ago

    great write Brit,,,

  • Thank You for saying so Rocky!

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...almost 3 years ago

    Beautifully written, I could feel those emotions, that burden and of course the Colourful Rainbow that makes things so serene – I enjoyed this so much – Well done – Regards David

  • Thank You for stopping by and leaving such positive comments, very much appreciated David!

    …Brit….

    – TheBrit

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