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Within the Lens of my eye !

The softness of a fluffy clouded
sky, floating within slow motion,

A clock forever ticking backwards,

Taking us all into a previous era,

Thunder crackling throughoutt
the universe,

Daydreaming of yesterday year,

As if a certain day never moved
forward or back, standing still !

Going back and forth, time lapse
of a different kind, imagination
running wild,

As if , having to choose one
particular day to revisit,

Held in the palm of your hand
within a crystal ball,

Seeing through mesmerizing eye’s

A disconcerted expression upon
one’s face,

Knowing you have had so many
adventurous days, you just could not decide
on any certain day to revisit,

If I concentrate , dig deep enough
perhaps I could revisit a life altering
experience within a time of my life ?

Was it an accident, was it a death
I wonder ?

So many memories racing through
my mind,

No more slow motion !

The cine camera within my mind
is turning within a warp speed,

Just an amalgamation of flickering
images,

Waiting for the wheels to pinpoint
on one particular day,

My eyelids closed, in a deep, deep
sleep of unconsciousness I fell ,

I could sense an eeriness of chills
running along my spine,

My spirit floated above my slumbering
body,

The ceiling stopped me from rising
any further,

Looking down I saw my body,
my face had no expression,

All I wanted to do was to feel the warmth
of encircling blood of life,

I panicked and fell,

Within a millisecond of excruciating
pain,

I awakened shocked and so relieved
to be alive,

Ready to live within the lens of my
eye,

With or without You !

Within the Lens of my eye !

TheBrit © 2013

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Comments

  • markhadafairday
    markhadafairdayover 1 year ago

    outstanding piece

  • Thank You Mark , Appreciated !
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Anthea  Slade
    Anthea Sladeover 1 year ago

    Wow amazing write Brit this is from another world.

  • Thank You my friend Anthea , I take this as a huge compliment , very much appreciated … :))
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Norma-jean Morrison
    Norma-jean Mor...over 1 year ago

    Brit, this is done with beauty and knowing, this is a beautiful write, all goodness always

  • Thank You so very much Norma JM … :)
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindover 1 year ago

    Wow Brit. Was this a sort of psychic experience? Were you just kind of spacing out? Awesome write either way. Love this subject matter. Hugs, shar xoxoxoxxoxo

  • Hi Shar , This out of body experience did actually happen , this write is fiction and non fiction , glad you enjoyed the read , Your support is sooo appreciated!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Sherri     Nicholas
    Sherri Nic...over 1 year ago

    Hi Brit, wonderful!! you sure put your thoughts together in this one…great job my dear friend..
    Have a great day…
    don’t forget The black is beautiful challenge sept 7 it starts..okey dokey
    Sherri
    huggs

  • Thank You so very much Sherri, glad to see you back :) Yep a lot of thought went into this work glad you enjoyed the read ….. :))
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosover 1 year ago

    Ay!!! you could see….you could shape the world, either in dreams or not. But Time..that time, the dreams have fixed an anomalous pace for this aspect of our life…so important. But it is much better to be still and listen. Rather than seeing , when we are kept in Silence, then we can truly feel the Time as a breathing….not longer, not shorter than our sighing. I love your poem, for it is a revival of many things, that are there to tell you how alive is the Soul.Once in a while…I know, you need to get your lens focused. And place the things where they belong….and you know what they are? Not more than those “fluffy clouds”….set in appereance by the “sun”.
    Rosa

  • To feel the time as a breathing !! Such a wonderful line Rosa ! To be fully focused , yes absolutely ! Your comments are always so very thought provoking , Thank You so very much for taking the time to read and comment on my work , Truly Appreciated !!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • CanyonWind
  • Thank You PoP’s , Very much Appreciated!!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • ✿✿ Bonita ✿✿ ђєℓℓσ

    Wonderfuly written and expressed truely an outer body experiance a fav

  • Thank You so very much Bonita …..
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • paintingsheep
    paintingsheepover 1 year ago

    Awesome experience…and really excellent write!

  • It is one I shall never forget :) Many Thanks for taking the time to comment Gena ….:)
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • KazM
    KazMover 1 year ago

    C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    Your work has been featured in the
    “IF IT DOESN’T BELONG Group ":http://www.redbubble.com/groups/if-it-dosent-be...:

  • Thank Kaz, This Feature is very much Appreciated !!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

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