The very first Kiss ......................

A desire so long awaited for

as lips touched, the melding

of soft tender skin

so full of emotional release

pressing so firmly and yet

so very gentle as tongues

danced within a raw passionate ballet

breathing pure sensuality

along each others cheeks as the heat

of the moment transpired into

a timeless intensity between the two

for this was sheer beauty

within a pure passionate embrace

as two hearts released emotions

through every palpitating vein

as lips rivetingly danced

to the rhythm of two beautiful

hearts,

for this pure passionate desire

to give of each other

the very first Kiss

The very first Kiss………………….

TheBrit © 2013

The very first Kiss ...................... by 


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  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 2 years ago

    OMG…I’m getting palpitations!!! xo

  • Good morning Sally, Thank You for that big smile which you put on my face this morning :))

    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Raymond Kerr
    Raymond Kerrabout 2 years ago

    Great words ..

  • Thank You Ray for stopping by and for commenting, very miuch Appreciated!
    …Brit …

    – TheBrit

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooabout 2 years ago

    beautiful poetry

  • Thank You Boo….
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Donna19
    Donna19about 2 years ago

    So sweet of you to share your moment:) Lovely Brit

  • Thank You and good morning Donna , imagination is a wonderful thing :))
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Guendalyn
    Guendalynabout 2 years ago

    I LOVE IT WORDS!

  • Thank You so very much , glad you like the words Guenda :)
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • CanyonWind
    CanyonWindabout 2 years ago

  • Thank You CW, This Feature is very much Appreciated!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • ✿✿ Bonita ✿✿ ђєℓℓσ
    ✿✿ Bonita ✿✿ ђ...about 2 years ago

    Congratulatons on your feature nicely written and presented im feelin the love a fav hugs.

  • Thank You Bonita, appreciated:)
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • MINDSET
    MINDSETabout 2 years ago

    Good writing my friend…………..

  • Thank You for saying so :)
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

  • Sally Omar
    Sally Omarabout 2 years ago

    ♥♥♥♥♥FEATURED IN UP & COMING WRITERS♥♥♥♥♥

    CONGRATULATIONS & THANK YOU FOR YOUR CONTRIBUTIONS TO THE GROUP!!!

  • Thank You so very much Sally dear , This Feature is very much Appreciated!
    …Brit…

    – TheBrit

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