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a Vortex in time by TheBrit

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BEST WHEN VIEWED LARGE

artwork was painted and manipulated in photoshop
added a few layers and reworked the image, added a couple of filters ,

Then i came up with the writing for this piece all fiction!

Thank You for stopping by, all comments are sincerely appreciated;

best to listen to the music while reading this work .

a Vortex in time

my body feels as though the life

and soul has been sucked

into a Vortex of time

not going forward

not going backward

held like a prisoner

in a timefield

which does not tick anymore

but yet my body is aging

This vortex in time

is sucking every ounce

of positivity from within

my very being

Talk about feeling blue

This my friends

is purgatory in

the blue zone

forever encircling

oneself

a Vortex in time

.

Writing and Art

TheBrit © 2011

Tags

sad, sadness, alone, purgatory, blue, soul, spirit, self

Art… writing…music… photography…life
is my Passion.

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Comments

  • autumnwind
    autumnwindalmost 3 years ago

    Yes, viewed larger is a must. Stunning once again. One of my favs, truly. XOXOXOXOXXOXO

  • Thank You so very much Shar!! Your comments and support are truly appreciated!!

    Brit :))

    – TheBrit

  • LoveringArts
    LoveringArtsalmost 3 years ago

    Stunning Music , Mesmerizing images makes feel sooooooooooooooo chilled out ! !
    A Fabulous work dear Brit….Your so kind , your words mean a lot ,and make me smile.. Paul

  • Paul ,Thank You for your generous words and your support is very much appreciated, glad to make you smile,,
    cheers mate!!

    Brit :)

    – TheBrit

  • Guendalyn
    Guendalynalmost 3 years ago

    Wonderfull <work….fantastico !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! e la musica un suono magico…(era beautiful anche cosi)…guenda

  • Thank You so very much for your very enthusiastic comments GUENDA!! I do appreciate your support very much so!!

    Brit :))

    – TheBrit

  • mordechai
    mordechaialmost 3 years ago

    AWESOME!!!

    P.S.- Would you consider submitting this to “ImageWriting”?

  • Thank You so very much for the honor of this feature mordechai!!

    I had already submitted this work to "imagewriting: Thank You once again!!

    Brit : ps, was that you who i just heard Screaming??

    – TheBrit

  • MaryMac
    MaryMacalmost 3 years ago

    an emotional piece of writing and image
    Brit you’re so talented to capture feeling
    wonderful your expressions
    peace love and happiness always
    andrea xo

  • Thank You Andrea for your thoughtful comments!! Very much appreciated!!

    Brit :)

    – TheBrit

  • Sazzart
    Sazzartalmost 3 years ago

    Congratulations on your Feature.

  • MANY THANKX SAZZ!!!!!!!!!

    Brit :)

    – TheBrit

  • raymondoantonio
    raymondoantonioalmost 3 years ago

    BRILLIANT IMAGE THEBRIT!!!! BRAVO!
    A POWERFUL WRITE TOO..WE CAN BE TRAPPED IN OUR PERSONAL BLUE ZONES….BUT CAN ALSO ESCAPE!! BRAVO!

  • Very True RAMONDOANTONIO ,Your comments are always appreciated!

    Cheers mate!!

    Brit :)

    – TheBrit

  • Vitta
    Vittaalmost 3 years ago

    EXCELLENT WORK!!!

  • Thank You for your viewes on this work Vitta! Very much appreciated!!

    Brit :)

    – TheBrit

  • shadowlea
    shadowleaalmost 3 years ago

    outstanding love the atmosphere and the title…..beautiful work

  • Thank You so very much Shadowlea!!Your comments are very much appreciated!!

    Brit :))

    – TheBrit

  • mordechai
    mordechaialmost 3 years ago

    Okay, now it’s in ImageWriting. Now I can feature it in another group. Told you it’s awesome.

  • THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    – TheBrit

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