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Broken
Pieces of lifes puzzle
fell into place
the moment
I heard your words…
Hours spent sharing
the details of the fabric
that makes us who we are…
Foot steps taken knowing
we share the same view
even though you
see the sun
when I see
the moon…
Broken…
The word spins
continues to spin
through my thoughts
Broken…
Do I have to face it?
Broken…
The details in the fabric
change
but stay the same…
We still share the same view
even though you
see the sun
when I see
the moon…
Broken…
AF Matthews 23.5.11
Broken by Teacup
Details in the fabric…
If it’s a broken part, replace it
If its a broken arm then brace it
If it’s a broken heart then face it
Lyrics by Jason Mraz
Comments
wow brilliant write TC, I even love the use of italics, gives dramatic effect to the word that repeats. Now stop distracting me from my psychology revision. ;)
Thanks so much Nathan and sorry for the distraction – but you could probably practice your psychology on this piece! I tried linking the song via youtube, but it wouldn’t work… it is so very beautiful a song… x
– Teacup
Beautifully written!
Thank you as ever Chris…x
– Teacup
oh my, those words are so full
hi there Judy, thanks for such a wonderful comment. Truely appreciated….x
– Teacup
Such a thought provoking piece, beautifuly composed-
“We still share the same view
even though you
see the sun
when I see
the moon…”
Yeah…siiigh
Great write, Alison!
xx
Thanks so much Anni… sometimes the small stuff is all we have!
– Teacup
great write
Thanks Boo…x
– Teacup
This is really beautiful. I love the sun and moon references – but you both see the sky! xxoo
Thanks Rikki and Yes, we both do see the same sky and know that we at least have that…x
– Teacup
Ohh Alison, making my heart ache here. So beautiful and so eloquent, but the word Broken… I just want to shelter you from that. I want to give you hope and say all things are still possible, so I will believe it…if you do. Sending love and hugs, shar xoxoxoxo ♥♥♥
Dear Shar, your words have brought a smile and a tear… I too live with hope in my heart, even though at times it feelings like the hope is piercing deep! Thanks you so much for the shelter, ’tis need some days… love and hugs to you too dear friend…x
– Teacup
Truly heartfelt and deeply moving…allow me to say beautiful!
Oh Lisa, such a beautiful comment from such a beautiful soul… thank you…x
– Teacup
24th May 2011
Hi there Alison, this is such an honour… I must apologise for taking so long in thanking you and the group for the feature… Thank you… xx
– Teacup
oh my,
amazing, heartfelt, wise
and has me stuck to a point and not about to move in a hurry
xxxxx
Oh Lisa, such a wonderful comment that I have read and reread… thank you…x
– Teacup