Sex on the Death Bed

TBall
Author: TBall
Word Count: 112
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Sex on the Death Bed

domestic
gay

Sex on the Death Bed belongs to the following groups:

Anger Management, Core [C.O.R.E], Gay Men, Politics, Race, Sexuality and Culture and Queer and Gender Theories Group

Desires stolen by naked youths, instant access to innocents lost.
I don’t want to grow old,
I don’t want you to grow old.
Desires sucked away by the familiarity of your cock, my mouth, teeth and tongue.
I don’t want to grow
I don’t want you to grow.
Desires declining in the comfort of the other, your arms around my bloated belly
I don’t want to
I don’t want you to
Desires distracted by the boys at the bull-pen, hot and filthy wall flowers
I don’t want
I don’t want you
Desire stains on our death- bed, back to back, sleeping under satin, remembering the others touch, when we were young.

  • butchart

    butchart

    and so it goes… passion is lost.. and wasted on the young….. if we only knew the secret of keeping it fresh and live….. or is it something that only comes in the mystery and excitement of the new? this is a very thoughtful and raw piece….... a great place to write from….......b

  • TBall replied

    thanks- not sure if i acknowledged this previously

  • Denis Dalby

    Denis Dalby

    So much truth and sadness in that last line, but would we change anything if we were to live again?

  • TBall replied

    thanks Dennis- it is sad but it is also about acceptance of the changing natures of long term relationships…..

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Truth written, read, digested, and well….sucks. But, it’s not always this way.

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    This is a wow my friend..I love the honesty and clarity of your words.

  • TBall replied

    thanks for all of the above comments

  • Teacup

    Teacup

    excellent… make me think… I always like that when it happens! x

  • TBall replied

    thanks teacup

  • Shaun Green

    Shaun Green

    Heartfelt and elegiac. Nicely done.

  • TBall replied

    thanks for all your comments, I plan to go though your material over the next few days, enjoy your style of writing

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