Bright Eyes

Taine
Author: Taine
Word Count: 43
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Bright Eyes

Bright Eyes belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and The Word Tree

Bright eyes,
reflections of embers burnt;
but not extinguished.

One long, fierce,
burst.
Tongues lashing
upwards;
scorching,
flaying layer after another

each new offering
cauterized, safe,
sealed.

Warmer,
with depth.
Once cold walls,
cold halls,
now imbued
in sensation,
sympathies

and strength.

  • Caroline Gorka

    Caroline Gorka

    Exciting and heart-warming …well written Taine :))

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Wow so very beautiful, I’ve read a few times now and each time….this means more to me…

    Thank you for writing it XO

  • Brett Foster

    Brett Foster

    Top stuff Shawn!

  • bearpaw

    bearpaw

    w o w….

  • MissKristy

    MissKristy

    Oh yes…this has to be a fav.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German

    each new offering
    cauterized, safe,
    sealed.
    love these lines shawn….so well written love it!

  • RoxyLust

    RoxyLust

    wow a gd read :) xx

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