What Am I?

Suzanne German
Author: Suzanne German
Word Count: 74
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What Am I?

A Question…For You…

What Am I? belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

I communicate without noise.

I am noted without words.

I am recorded without paper.

I am spoken in silence.

I listen without ears.

I see without eyes.

I know without thinking.

I feel without touch.

I belong without asking.

I understand without questions.

I am free inside barriers.

I am strong without muscle.

I am fair without need.

I am clear inside cloud.

I am without form.

(C) Copyright – Suzanne German – 29 November, 2007.

  • demon

    demon

    Love

  • Mark German

    Mark Germancommunity host

    A banana?

  • chanel

    chanel

    Mother nature?

  • StacyLee

    StacyLee

    “I am strong without muscle” that’s my favorite line :)

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    I’m with Rocky,

    LOVE

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA

    nah – you got me!

  • demon

    demon

    Woohooo!!! wins the boobie prize…

  • Avery Etherine

    Avery Etherine

    This is fantastic, I recently wrote one of the same, “Love in all its Perceptions” not as good as your and a great deal longer, but the skill is describing a thing with as little words and as many metaphors as possible. lol

  • JOHN WELLS

    JOHN WELLS

    subconscious?...excellent work ive read this over and over captivating. :)

  • Barkertron

    Barkertron

    Briliant again! i love the angles you approach your writing from, its something else, its like you are suggesting the question by providing your own answer. or something. lol its mysterious and thought provoking anyway… :)

  • seraph

    seraph

    a period after every line to take it in like a sophisticated animal

  • seraph

    seraph

    i am a big fan of the english language

  • Brett Foster

    Brett Foster

    This is great Suzanne.
    Are you possibility?
    Are you imagination?
    Are you a muse?
    You certainly have love to give!

  • stephenloomes

    stephenloomes

    And in the midst of all this putative silence you rip out this poem to the world at large…why not, imagination is free.

  • NordicBlackbird

    NordicBlackbird

    Beautiful piece, Suzanne :))
    As to the/one possible answer, LOVE erupted off my lips… as a plausible heartbeat :))

    Nat

  • NordicBlackbird

    NordicBlackbird

    you beautiful poet :))

    N x

  • DaisyLadiE

    DaisyLadiE

    wow very deep but very understandable…indeed!!!!!!

  • chazz

    chazz

    You captured it perfectly. Fantastic!!!

  • ufosIsee

    ufosIsee

    So many visions to this nice poetry you have, I have a poem on here with the same name What am I… It sorta like a puzzle riddle if you like take a read.

  • marieangel

    marieangel

    wow this says everything…i so enjoyed!;))

  • bloorain

    bloorain

    well penned!

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