What Am I?
A Question…For You…
What Am I? belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, PhilosophicalI communicate without noise.
I am noted without words.
I am recorded without paper.
I am spoken in silence.
I listen without ears.
I see without eyes.
I know without thinking.
I feel without touch.
I belong without asking.
I understand without questions.
I am free inside barriers.
I am strong without muscle.
I am fair without need.
I am clear inside cloud.
I am without form.
(C) Copyright – Suzanne German – 29 November, 2007.
demon
Love
Mark German
A banana?
chanel
Mother nature?
StacyLee
“I am strong without muscle” that’s my favorite line :)
Lisa Jewell
I’m with Rocky,
LOVE
PhotogeniquE IPA
nah – you got me!
demon
Woohooo!!! wins the boobie prize…
Avery Etherine
This is fantastic, I recently wrote one of the same, “Love in all its Perceptions” not as good as your and a great deal longer, but the skill is describing a thing with as little words and as many metaphors as possible. lol
JOHN WELLS
subconscious?...excellent work ive read this over and over captivating. :)
Barkertron
Briliant again! i love the angles you approach your writing from, its something else, its like you are suggesting the question by providing your own answer. or something. lol its mysterious and thought provoking anyway… :)
seraph
a period after every line to take it in like a sophisticated animal
seraph
i am a big fan of the english language
Brett Foster
This is great Suzanne.
Are you possibility?
Are you imagination?
Are you a muse?
You certainly have love to give!
stephenloomes
And in the midst of all this putative silence you rip out this poem to the world at large…why not, imagination is free.
NordicBlackbird
Beautiful piece, Suzanne :))
As to the/one possible answer, LOVE erupted off my lips… as a plausible heartbeat :))
Nat
NordicBlackbird
you beautiful poet :))
N x
DaisyLadiE
wow very deep but very understandable…indeed!!!!!!
chazz
You captured it perfectly. Fantastic!!!
ufosIsee
So many visions to this nice poetry you have, I have a poem on here with the same name What am I… It sorta like a puzzle riddle if you like take a read.
marieangel
wow this says everything…i so enjoyed!;))
bloorain
well penned!