Salvation In A Storm
This poem is the first poem I have written in almost 10 years. God has been whispering in my ear that it was time to pick up the pen, and write more poetry.
This poem mirrors the concept of the painting that has the same title.
Stephen
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The greenish gray clouds with their erie glow, race across the sky like winged
giants, who howl their threats to drawn me with their bucket of rain.
The ocean is like a sadistic juggler, with it’s mountainous size waves,
it throws me up into the air, then rolls me head over heels underneath it’s self.
When it grows board of tormenting me, it threatens to dash me against the rocks.
I struggle to keep my head above water, to expel water out of my lungs, and to
gasp my next breath of life.
I bob up and down in the ocean like a Bobber on the end of a fisherman’s pole,
Who has a fish tugging on his line, the ocean tugs at me, trying to pull me under.
In my helplessness I cry out for help, but my pleas fall on deaf ears of my family and friends, for they do not come out to me in boats or throw me a life raft, to rescue me. They stand on the shore motionlessly, like statues in a Greek garden.
My body becomes zapped of energy, like the ocean had stuck a straw into me, and sucked all of my energy out of my body.
My body becomes numb and motionless as if it turned to stone. At any moment I fear I will sink to the bottom of the ocean, like a ship’s anchor.
Then a voice whispers to me, but in my mind the voice echoes through me like a sound made in an empty hall way.
It says to me, ” Come to Me , you who are weary and heavy laden, and I will give you rest .”
When I recognized who is whispering to me, I cry out to God to rescue me.
Suddenly right before my weary eye, out of the dark stormy sea arose a platform in the shape of a cross, it was made of wood and had a pure gold surface, it had steps on for sides of it.
By faith I ascended the steps, and got down on my bended knee, and gave thanks to God for providing salvation in a storm.
As if He acknowledged my prayer, a blinding light broke through the dark satin sky.
The clouds who were like winged giants, their howling threats were silenced.
The sadistic juggler, the ocean, became a tamed gentleman
The platform in shape of the cross transported me safely to the shore of stability.
This is what it’s like to tread water in a trial in my life.
Written by Stephen J. Vattimo
August 28, 2008
Estelle O'Brien
Stephen this is a wonderful wonderful poem. I put it into my favourites straight away so that I can read it again and again. The imagery you have used with your powerful words struck at my heart. I felt as if I was out there in the storm too. You have crafted the liines with emotion and a strong flowing style….eading the reader straight up into sight of the beautiful platform of Salvation. The line about the family and friends stading on the shore as if in Greek garden speaks volumes! It is only our personal decision with the Lord Jesus Christ that counts in life! And He is the only salvation in life’s storms. I cannot tell you how much I like this work – the Lord has given you a great gift of poetry, my brother. So well done!
Stephen J. Va... replied
Estelle,
Thank you for taking time today, to read my poem Salvation In A Storm,
I am glad that you like it, as i said it’s been nearly ten year since I have written a new poem. So when I saw the counter only showing nine hits, and not moving for the last three days, I was concerned.
Thank you again.
Stephen
Tony Ryan
Hi Stephen,
So glad to see you writing again. I can relate to your story. I think that true strength often comes when all hope and support seems lost.
Best Wishes Tony.
Stephen J. Va... replied
Tony,
Good to hear from you. Here is a Bible verse to comfort all who are going through a trial, or who will face one in the future.
John chapter 16 : 33
” These things I have spoken to you, that in Me you may have peace.
In the world you have tribulation, but take courage ; I have overcome
the world .”
( words of Jesus )
Stephen
Tony Ryan
Thanks Stephen. I think that if people went deep enough they would realise that they too could overcome and be free in the world. Jesus in my opinion embraced all of his experiences and was transparent in his thoughts and feelings. If people exercised these same traits I believe that the world would open up.
Best Wishes Tony.
cougarfan
stevengeer
Very emotive and powerful, thank you for sharing!
Stephen J. Va... replied
Steven,
Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem,” Salvation In A Storm”.
I also have a painting I did with the same title and theme, which I did many year before!
It is cool how God will bring us back to a theme again at a later date.
I hope you will stop by my gallery and enjoy my other works of art and writings, I hope god will use them to be a blessing in your live.
Stephen , for Surealworld galleries
Amber Elizabet...
Wonderful Writing Stephen =)))

Stephen J. Va...
Amber Elizabret,
Thank you, for featuring my poem entitled,” Salvation In A Storm,” on the Masterpiece Literary Workshop Group. It is a pleasure to see the Lord using my work to bless other people.
I think some of the gift God gives aren’t given to us to profit our selves, but to bless others.
Stephen, For Surealworld Galleries
Amber Elizabet...
FANTASTIC WRITE!!!
Jim Hall
Deep within us all is the answer to any questions we may have. Our life’s hope is to find those answers. If only we knew that all we have to do is look inside! There, one will find the answers to everything. The Great Spirit has made it so. Good poem, good comment on the troubles of life. Keep on. You will surprise yourself. JH