adults only blue burlesque crime gangsters noir pulp fiction r rated stillbeing underworld
Wow! Some great elements to this story.Red door to contrast the blue contentWould have liked more kissing though – often find that the sexiest thing in noir pulp fictionLove the colour in many of the names – made Bernadette seem that much more a contrast to the Ruby, Sapphire, etc.Good job xoxo
Heh, you know, I didn’t think of that, the connection between Ruby’s and the red door and the blue vs red . . .
But I’ll make a note of that: next noir, more kissing!
Very intriguing write. You have a wonderful style that draws the reader in, anticipating what comes next. Love the detailed description of the scenes…particularly the action one…an unfamiliar one for me but made very realistic…puts the reader into the story.
Thanks . . . I’ve started on the second story, I’ve got plans for a trilogy so I probably should get onto finishing that!
Sounds great!! A trilogy along … wow…fantastic. :-)
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