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wow, I had no idea where this would take me – to the edge of my seat for sure… excellent… have you thought of putting this is the Twisted Tales group!
Hey :-) Thanks for the comment. I haven’t really thought about putting this up in any groups yet, mostly because I haven’t quite worked out how they work yet. I’m planning to do a bit more exploring over the weekend but thanks for the tip!
wowyou can writecare to join bloopers?
i found you on red roomthat is a brill groupshow us your bloopers is an easy going group that has a few basic rules but am sure you will enjoy being a memberannie
Thanks for the suggestion :-) I’m still learning my way around the groups, but I’ll certainly keep it in mind!
I like this, you have a very engaging style. I want to put up my writing too. Apprehension reigns though….
You should! Just dive in – what’s the worst that can happen?
(well, apart from maybe the computer exploding as you upload and splattering you with hot techno-shrapnel. That might not be the worst but it would be pretty bad . . . )
But anyway, what kind of stuff do you write? I’m guessing that’s your text in a lot of your works, yeah?
Always. Ive a very dark side…..
Dark is ok . . .
I like a good femme fatale storyline. And red leather….mmm
Thanks :-) It was one of those stories that just came together – the red coat wasn’t planned, she was just wearing it when she turned up shrug
This is great!
Wow, thank you! And my first feature too!!
Great writing Stillbeing….I heard Humphrey Bogart narrating throughout…brilliant suspense builder and perfect ending.
Thanks :-) I know what you mean – I had a certain voice in my head when I was writing it too (but that’s half the fun).
Interesting and suspenseful write. Hmmm, still wondering what all the bad people knew…trouble in the air?
Thank you! :-) I think the bad people could smell the “bacon in the air” mentioned just before – an increased police presence in the city. It’s usually enough to keep most crooks at home but as in real life there are always some who ignore it or are too stupid to take notice! ;-)
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