I am anxiously caving in
waiting for love to wash over my shores
the sails of time crashing in once more
making me falter in the undertow
.
there was a time when I could see myself
see myself against that horizon line
against the soft streak of paint
dashing my foot against the water’s edge
.
and then he came to me in a dream
hunting me down in my own backyard
taking me under with hand and foot
clashing trees against thorn and lines against curves
.
now here I remain paralyzed in this globe
seeking the way out through cracks
hiding from those rocks and high hills
fading between the words he would never say
.
but the ocean comes back fast with her revenge
her waves never forgetting what he’s done
she seeks to return the woman who was taken away
the woman who was lost and driven away
.
sun shining lightly on my hands as I awake
no longer in this dark space of shade
but on that horizon where I first met man
where my life really began caving in
.
he will come to her once the light hits the dawn
and this time he comes to embrace, not to take
for old shadows haunt and distort his eyes
and he has learned never to mess with his bride
© 2008 Stacy Lee
Dawn Awakes Such Things of Old
A story :)
Leon Walker, 4 months ago
Stacy, this is absolutely incredible!!! A moving vision and feel of swirling emotion. Happiness, pain and resiliance (sp)! Good for you. I will continue to watch for more of your wonderful works!
Anthony Hedger, 4 months ago
Hey Stacy, I think Leon (above) has just said it for me. You never fail to fill out hearts wityh your moving lovely stories. This is so beautiful.
ELENNE BOOTHE, 4 months ago
This is sobeautiful. wonderful writing Stacy. keep them coming.
Heather Loster, 4 months ago
so wonderful stacy. you are an awesome writer.
Suzanne German, 4 months ago
those final words in the last stanza hold such potency and feeling…wow
WayoftheWarrior, 4 months ago
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
bites, 4 months ago
Just a stunning piece of work, taking it back to my faves! xx
Anisha Aiyappa, 4 months ago
you are an amazing writer, im quite close to that situation and it brought tears. amazing
Trish Cooper, 4 months ago
WoW!!!! I love this Stacy!!!!! Fantastic work!!!!!!!! HUGS xoxoxoxoxox
jianina, 4 months ago
Love your verbs…has a fluid feel…for example…”her waves never forgetting what he’s done”
Great line….as well as….”fading between the words he would never say”
Jazzyjane, 4 months ago
what can I say. I think the others have said it for me. I am not very poetic with words. Well done.
Helene Kippert, 3 months ago
Wow Stacy powerful work!
markgb, 2 months ago
A-MA-ZING