He Comes Slowly
I’m happy to report that this poem has been published in the “In The Moment” competition book :) I am thrilled and honored!
He comes slowly
mist smoke cloud noise
he writes his own drum beats
fog aroma
beats hitting the surface
breakdown
I beg for the stuff to come out underneath
I beg and I beg
I pray and I pray
I want it to explode
EVEN IF IT MEANS I LOSE MY SPACE
meltdown off
applause lights chaos
I’m still waiting
gentle breeze
violent perfection
love come over
silence will have her way.
© 2007 Stacy Lee
GrayeaglePhotography
hummm no words
ozjami
im’...speechless…Great writing Stacey!!:D
Jeff Burns
Incredible writing this is fantastic
mlgkats
very great writing stacy .well done
BarryKing
very powerful and full of emotion….. brilliant writing Stacy :)
hugs
Bear
Deri Dority
Beautiful Stacy!!! You are such a master at this. I hope that you have some entries in the “In the Moment” contest. Your talent should be showcased.
clau
Absolutely brilliant!!!:)
Globalphotos
Wow !!
Trish Cooper
Stacy…so beautiful..XOXOXO
gordontant
brilliant, just brilliant
ECGardner
Beautifully written, full of emotion. Very nicely done, Stacy.
Judy Gayle Waller
Well written my friend…love the words.
Heather Loster
wonderful words stacy.
Suzanne German
what an interesting piece of writing…it’s ambiguous and i like it because of that.
suzanne
Lidiya Filipova
very sensual… as a puff of wind, but it takes by a storm
Cheri McEachin
Excellent writing—you rock!!
PhotogeniquE IPA
so intense and powerful – deep emotions screaming for air and than gasping the pure oxygen.
botticcelli
powefull!
Pilgrim
powerful, strange an intriguing
wolfllink
Wow Wonderfuly writen Beautiful and prwerful Filled with emotion!
Helene Kippert
Brilliant writing Stacy – very powerful
transmute
I fell straight in to this. Magic writing.
Leon Walker
Speak woman!!!
ktowers
awesome
revad
Great news Stacy :-)
StacyLee replied
Thank you so much Dave :)
roybarry
Stacy-quite brilliant art
StacyLee replied
Thank you kindly Roy :)