Love
This is about a man who has thrown in the towel, and does not feel deserved of a love he will never have or feel, but feels like he has been a toy. I guess he doesn’t understand.
Love belongs to the following groups:
! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Healing Journey and WMGIt’s okay I am a big boy,
I can take the fall,
Just hit a wall,
I wish it was real,
But another fail,
Will help me peel,
Away illusion,
And see the truth,
Baby, you‘re just to good,
I just couldn’t live up to,
What you promised I could be,
Can’t you see,
Am just a prick,
A dick,
A bowl of sick,
Just point and laugh
At this pointless man,
I thought this was a perfect love,
With light and a flying dove,
I was kidding myself,
Twist that knife,
Remind me where I belong,
Give me reality,
I don’t deserve your song,
I wasted your time,
Just flick me off your shoe,
Forget in demons,
But I won’t forget you,
You wouldn’t believe it if was true,
My words don’t count,
No matter how much I mount,
Or shout,
I could never give,
What you truly deserve,
I could have been your berth,
I’d just never be enough,
I just want to sink,
I want to get lost,
Foolish man with a foolish dream,
You were my favourite food,
Strawberries and cream,
But just a dream,
Just out of touch,
Out of reach,
Just out of sight,
I tried with all my might,
I painted words to touch your heart,
But words are words,
Pointless like a fart,
My love was not tart,
But carefully shared,
I should have just stayed closed,
And locked the door,
Suffered in silence,
And held the love inside,
Now I’m just drowning,
Swallowed by the tide,
Although I am glad,
I deserve the pain,
I wanted something,
That I could never have,
Never hold,
Was it bold,
To share,
I wasn’t fair,
I am selfish,
I should have just stapled my mouth,
I live I learn,
I now live to die,
Screw the love,
I don’t have enough to buy,
That expensive rug,
Just to be walked over,
And ripped and torn,
Fuck it,
It won’t be worn,
If was a great T,
Even if it should last forever,
I don’t want to see.
This towel is yours,
But keep the heart,
Keep it forever,
I never want to see it,
I mean never ever,
I just want to shiver,
Return to dark,
Forget that spark ,
You said I had,
I know you were being kind,
And I’m glad,
I want you to know,
That I gave my all,
And asked for nothing in return,
Let me forget love,
And watch those letters burn.
Living in a dream,
Of pure bliss
Voluptuous lips
Ending fist
I love you,
I hate me,
Take the key,
Only you can return,
But I know you won’t,
Then I am safe,
If you ever don’t.
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colorblind
Take the key,
Only you can return,
But I know you won’t,
Then I am safe,
If you ever don’t.
Spraven you just don’t stop with it don’t you
lol
keep the goods coming love what you have spewed
a nice bundle of writes
helene ruiz
wow..some pwerful stuff here spraven…missed reading your works , was away for a while
MyheART
wow….excellent read…full of emotions…
Sally Omar
Emotional…awesome…def FAV!!!!!!!!! xoxoxoxoxo
Shoaib .
wow sprave man… i think many guys feel like this at some point in their relationship… you are def not alone, heartfelt words man, thanks for sharing this with us
jacqleen
OMG….....wow…..........such a sad sad writing and journey here…...yet the fact that you see and realize what you had and could not have just tore my heart…...I LOVED reading this….it was filled with so many different feelings!!! wonderful writing!
BiographyofRed8
this is really powerful writing mr, it is interesting you call the title “love”.. when it contains so much more
Barbara Cliff
very emotional, so now you feel much better and hopefully life moves along with energy and enjoyment, which you obviously have
TearsCall
A powerful and emotional write…Oh the power of Love…a painful yearning and journey and yet Love is everything…so beautiful…the key to life…...excellent write friend:).
arvyart
Spraven, everything will be OK! :)
Rhenastarr
So powerful, so intense, it is as if you are cleansing your soul, purging your entity of something that just could not be. Your writing wrings every bit of emotion out of the reader. Great job my friend!!
Kasey Cline
WOW!!!! in tears Hope you are well…..Just here for a moment!
Gregory John O...
Great read Spraven….. Love hurts, and we all need to be hurt…
Bernadette De ...
awesome..meakes me see how the other person feels..really great masterpeice!
Bernadette De ...
nd..I hope you are alright..sounds like this one cut really deep with a dull blade :S