God's Demon
No description for this one unfortunatly, I wouldn’t know what to say about it really…..Anyway I hope you like this piece
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! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Healing Journey and WMGI bare my all skinless to the bone,
Or to the soul I wish I had,
God just rip these wings,
Make me forget this life,
This love,
Make me cold once again,
Hollow out this empty shell,
Take the stepped on heart,
And place in your keep,
I want to walk this dreaded shit,
Alone, the way I had been,
The way I deserve,
The way I have been punished,
I lay my all at your feet,
And walk my path,
I am done with this,
I couldn’t handle it,
It never wanted the unforgiving me,
Denied by sins,
It’s the way it is,
This is for some,
But not for me,
I hand you everything,
Now I must leave.
If you cared for this sinner,
Please hear my words,
I know I have abandoned you,
I know I turned my back,
Now I hand you all,
I gave you nothing before,
I grew these horns,
And demonic wings,
I stood on plains,
Where most just screamed,
I have seen a morbid hell,
Carved by my own hands,
I can’t take back my sins,
And wouldn’t ask you too,
I need them to remind me,
Make me know where I don’t belong,
Where the signs say “Turn Back“,
I can’t have what people seek,
I am not allowed,
Was it when I first killed,
Was it when I first cut,
Was it the first drink,
Or when I wrote of my hate,
Maybe when I drew first blood,
Or lifted my hand to my fellow man,
Did I get it wrong,
When I stole from the rich,
And gave to me,
Was the road to this hell,
Through the drugs that promised heaven,
When heaven didn’t accept the likes of me,
Will I ever accept your hand?
Will I ever see it out reached?
Blinded by my sins,
I could never take your hand,
Only if I were a fool not to think I didn’t deserve this,
But God,
If you can make me suffer a little more,
Make me feel humbled in you presence,
I may take your hand,
When I am crippled of pain.
colorblind
And spraven strikes again
whoa this was a onslaught of emtion and the soul screaming
you truly brought hell with this one
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, I’m glad you liked this, and thanxz for the fav, I really appreciate that friend, yeah a little bit of hell followed this one ; ) Thanxz again mate!!
Erika .
I may take your hand,
When I am crippled of pain….wow Spraven, I agree with colorblind you brought hell with this piece. As always, amazing intense writing.
helene ruiz
whoa,,,,,,,this one gav e me the chills,,,,,very intense, emotive and certainly thought provoking…wow….this would make a good collab with some of my paintings…
MyheART
painful and emotive….very well written:)
Catherine Howell
(Job chapter 33…)
a painfully real write.
TearsCall
wow…you can feel the pain, hurt, dispair and longing in this piece…excellent write..peace, love and light to you friend:)
Kristina Sans
genius as always – really made me feel it
arvyart
Painful and sincere!
Ushna Sardar
Rhenastarr
Congrats on a powerful, gut wrenching, draw the breath from the body, exceptional piece of writing. Intense and mind blowing! WOW just wonderful writing my friend. KUDOS!!!!
JonoCarrick
Such a raw emotional poem of the loss of love and the pleading to heal.