Goddess
Yes, today I have spent it writting poems. A muse hit me hard with her good right hand, lol
This about a friend who is an angel to my belief. She is deserved of so much good though evil tried to destroy her, but in her own strength she still stands today in all her kindness and heart. She amazes me that through all the hell their stands an angel. I hope yous like this one ; )
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! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Friends of RedBubble, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Healing Journey, Up & Coming Writers and WMGShe stands in her hurt,
She feels all the blame,
Her wings she thinks torn,
Deserved of the pain.
How could an Angel,
Be left like this,
Suffering through mistakes,
More deserved of a kiss.
She only needs held,
In arms that care,
Arms of warmth,
Arms to share,
Someone to love,
Just one to care,
To make her first,
To mend the tear.
If you have seen her,
You would know,
She is beautiful,
In her flow,
She radiates her essence,
You would melt with her glow.
Her kindness untainted,
Like a new soul to earth,
Innocence tainted,
In stolen breath.
She never asked for the hurt,
The pain or reject,
They just selfishly gave,
When she tried to protect.
Please,
When you see her,
Could you give her my heart,
This Goddess needs love,
Let my sacrifice be the start.
I would tear it from my own,
Smash through the bone,
To give this woman my all,
And let light be her home.
Erika .
Once again, such emotion pours from your words. Beautiful devotional words, Spraven.
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, I am glad you liked this piece, it really means alot erika!!! ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend ; ), I appreciate that!!
Rhenastarr
WOW my friend what a lovely, quite tender piece from you. Beautifully expressed! A definite fav. I think some of your darkness as rubbed off on me, check out my Revengeful Heart.
Spraven replied
Yeah, Revengeful Heart
is a great piece friend, well done, I like your darker side, lol
Thanxz for the fav friend, I am glad you liked this piece, I appreciate your comments Rhenastarr ; ) Thank you!!! ; )
arvyart
Aww Spraven! Your words go to heart so decisively…
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, she does deserve all the best of things ; )
I really appreciate your comment on this piece ; )
Astoreth
Love your tender side Spraven….this is beautiful! I’ve gone from terrified to teary. xxxx
Spraven replied
Lol, I am glad I can make you feel different emotions, thank you friend ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend, I appreciate that ; )
silverstrummer...
Wow such beautiful words and such an accolade for the love of this person -
“Let my sacrifice be the start.
I would tear it from my own,
Smash through the bone,
To give this woman my all,
And let light be her home.”
A brilliant verse just beautifully written – David
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, she is well deserved of good ; )
I appreciate you comment, it means alot, thank you!!!! ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend ; ) I really appreciate that!!
linaji
YOU .. have my gut today.. I am with David above about my fav lines… really.. wow spaven.. wow.
Spraven replied
Thanzx linaji, I’m glad you liked this piece friend, thanxz for your encouraging comment ; )
It means alot!!!!
JenniferB
heehee… So great to see your soften side Spraven… Though I like it when you’re hard too! :-P
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, i am glad you like my softer side ; )
lol, and when I’m….em…hard?!
What a …..great comment ; )
Thanzx friend I appreciate that!!! and thanxz for the fav too ; )
Cassey
Lovely poetry for someone special I’m sure.
Spraven replied
Yes, for a great friend ; )
Thank you, I appreciate your comment on this friend, I am glad you liked this piece!!! ; )
Sorina Williams
very beautiful!!!
Spraven replied
Thank you friend and thanxz for the fav, I really appreciate that ; )
I amglad you liked this piece!!!
Kasey Cline
WOW!!!!! WOW!!!!! I am once again speechless….Beautiful words for a lucky someone!
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, I appreciate your comment and fav, it means alot Kasey,thanxz again!!!
Shoaib .
nice work spraven… very awesome dedication .. i m sure your friend will appreciate this
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, I hope she does, she well deserves this friend, thanxz for the comment, I really appreciate it!! ; )
WayoftheWarrior
Excellent
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, I appreciate that ; )
bearpaw
this is so very beautiful friend… you weave magic with your words…
Spraven replied
I am glad you approve, it means alot friend ; )
Thanxz for the fav too!! I really appreciate you and your comments and encouragement!!! ; )
Sally Omar
Definitely a FAV for me…this one touched my heart and pinched my soul…just absolutely
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xoxooxxoxo
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav friend and thanxz for the great comment, i really appreciate that ; ) !!!!
jim marshal
strong words and prayers Spraven, well written.
Spraven replied
Thanxz Jim, I appreciate your visits friend and your comments; ) It means alot!!!
TearsCall
oh wow…this one speaks straight to the heart and soul…your words are so beautiful and touching and so are you…need to go get a tissue now(smile:)
Spraven replied
Thank you friend for your lovely comments and compliment I really appreciate that TearsCall, and thank you also for the fav, it means alot friend!!!!! ; )
butchart
i’ve been off RB awhile… it’s nice to return to such lovely writing.. and a softer side of you…. heartfelt words can flow…a stream of consciousness….. that is the feeling i get with this piece…...... i hope you are well my friend….....b
Spraven replied
I am friend, and great to have you back ; )
Thanxz for your great comment butchart, I really appreciate that ; ) !!!!!!!!!!!!
helene ruiz
just wonderful! wow!
Spraven replied
Thanxz Helene, I’m glad you liked this, thanxz for the comment friend, I really appreciate it ; ) !!!!!
Gregory John O...
A good read Spraven… I hope you show it to her !!
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, I am glad you liked this friend…..yes she has seen, I think she liked it friend ; )
Thanxz again for your comment, I appreicate it!!!!! ; )
RavenSoul
AMAZING! You write VERY eloquently = ) Loved everything about this = )
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, I am glad you liked this piece and thanxz for the fav too, I really appreciate that ; ) !!!!
Leda D
this is so beautiful, i love it!
ellamental
Let light be her home….. This is “Soul Food” Thank you!!
Shelly Hiebert
Very lovely tribute to your muse. Beautifully written :)
yellowbee
hmmmmthis is soo full of wmotions…that it left me speechless…
beautiful, juust beautiful…
pepper08
Beautifully written my friend!
colorblind
whoa mate
again with the brilliant and untame of a flame writing
helene ruiz
beautiful
Ushna Sardar