A Gentle Peace
A small one for a change, I couldn’t add anything else if I tried, lol….and I did. I guess this is whatever you make of it, and I hope yous like this one friends ; )
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! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Friends of RedBubble, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Healing Journey, Up & Coming Writers and WMGLets dream a dream,
that I could never keep,
One that could make us weep,
Make the joy we find in sleep.
I have no questions,
I have no search,
Lets just dream that dream,
And look down from our perch.
Lets finds it’s promise,
It’s gift of love,
Crack it’s ice,
But not to rough,
Be gentle,
Be soft,
And handle with care,
For this dream of dreams,
Is for those who dare.
JamieLA
This is great.. very lyrical and soothing :)
Spraven replied
Thanxz JamieLA, glad you liked this friend, I am glad you found this soothing ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend!!, I really appreciate that ; )
Astoreth
You’ve got a tender side and I like it hon. Very appealing. There’s also a sadness in this…..”Lets dream a dream,
that I could never keep,”
I guess it’s all temporary in this life.
xx
Spraven replied
Thats the unfortunate thing friend, but it helps to make the most of it ; )
Thanxz for your comment Astoreth, I’m glad you find the softer side appealing, I appreciate that friend, thank you!!! ; )
Erika .
For this dream of dreams
Is for those who dare.....I love this
Spraven, this is really beautiful and delicately written….like Jane said, I also like your tender side, you create great poetry when that side comes out. I hope you let it show more often my friend. :) I love this poem.
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, I will try to show the lighter side more often if it is too your taste friend, thank you, I really appreciate your comments and the kindness you put in them ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend!! ; )
Agnes McGuinness
Beautiful poem, spraven. Agnes xx
Spraven replied
Thank you Agnes, I appreciate you comment friend, I’m glad you liked this piece ; )
Rhenastarr
The tender side of Spraven is a refreshing side to see!!
Spraven replied
I am glad you like the tender side friend, I will try to provide this more often ; )
Thanxz friend, I appreciate your comment on the piece, thank you!!! ; )
JenniferB
awww… you thaw this hard, cold little heart of mind Spraven! ;-)
Spraven replied
I thaw your heart? awww that’s nice, unfortunalty mines is stone, I’m f*ked, lol
Thanxz for the comment, it’s much appreciated and thank you also for the fav ; ) !!!
Cassey
Like a lullaby
Spraven replied
It is almost, I hadn’t noticed that, thanxz friend ; )
I really apprecciate your comments, thank you!!
bearpaw
just beautiful and magical
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, I have no idea what this is about, lol
Thanxz for the fav, I really appreciate it bearpaw and your comment, thank you ; )
Kasey Cline
Awwwww like it…Simple yet to the point….So good sooo soooo good! Goddess still the fav though!
Spraven replied
Yeah a bit simple, just a process of typing and this was the outcome, lol
Thanxz for the comment friend, it’s much appreciated ; )
skinnyman
this is good. Keep it short, it works.
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, I’m used to writting long poems, when I couldn’t add more I was annoyed, I tried too and it still didn’t work, lol
Think your right some just need to be short ; )
Thanxz for the comment friend!!! I really appreciate that ; )
TearsCall
a beautiful dream:)
Spraven replied
Thank you TearsCall and thanxz for the fav, I really appreciate that friend ; ) !!!!
ArcadiaTempest
The seemed to have a melancholy to it but also an undeniable spring of hope….. to the point writing that has eloquence and flow. X
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, yes this is whatever you make it, whatever your dream of dreams is I guess ; ) Thanxz for the comment friend I really appreciate it!!!!
helene ruiz
simply excellent
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just Featured in
WMG
Spraven replied
Wow, very cool, thanxz friend, it’s an honor ; ) !!!!!
DarKarsean
beautiful, excellent poem
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, I’m glad you liked this and thank for your visit and comment, I appreciate it ; ) !!!!!!
Jim Hall
Great stuff. Reminiscent of The Lady and The Tiger, can you choose wisely? JH
Spraven replied
Thanxz Jim, I appreciate that friend ; )
Could you elaborate on the lady and tiger thing, I feel daft for asking, but it would ignorant if I never, becuase I want to choose wisely ; ) thanxz friend!!!!
Songwriter
Very soothing and inviting. Stands on its own. Thanks. :0) Song
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, glad you liked this piece ; ) I appreciate your visit and comment friend!!! ; ) Thank you ; )
Jim Hall
Spraven, didn’t mean to be mysterious. The lady and the tiger is a story meant to ask a question of the reader(in my view) about which choice would he make. And after making the choice, what would be the consequences of either one. That’s kinda what i saw in your work. Good work, and short too! JH
Spraven replied
Ahh, I see, that’s interesting friend, i like the way you see this mate ; )
Nice one, you have an interesting mind Jim!! ; )
Shelly Hiebert
I am really enjoying your work as I sit here drinking my tea! So nice to read such beautiful words first thing in the morning. Another very nicely written poem….love it :)
pepper08
wonderful my friend
Sally Omar
Flows Beautifully…Love it!!!!!! xoxoxoxo