Hope
This is the end of my drive by bubbling, I can’t stay away, so I will be starting religiously again tomorrow. So I leave tongiht with a poem on the lighter side.
She is hope, that little thing that stand by all our sides, but she is broken by the state of the world, all the war, pain and suffering and hopeless thoughts are hurting her, no-one wants the light, why is it that people only see the light when the die, is their something wrong?
She wants light to be here, not only in death, change our way’s is the message or we will have no hope.
Sounds dark, but really it light or the search for light…well it has got the word light in it…okay, I’ll try better, here it is anyway ; )
Thanxz for your patience of my unlucky unfortunate events as of late, I really appreciate it, thanxz friends!!!
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! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Friends of RedBubble, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Shameless Self-Promotion, The Healing Journey and WMGShe is crushed by the hopeless,
Like acid to the world,
Melting all the kindness,
And breaking the passion,
Crumbling,
Hurting,
Feeling useless in the dark,
Bleeding,
Needing,
The love we lack.
She weeps over souls,
And war for peace,
Torn children,
And crying mothers,
Dead fathers,
And family smothers,
Loneliness is comfort,
As she holds the dead,
Unable to turn her head,
She sees it all,
And cries the blood you shed.
Stop and listen,
Hear her voice,
That whisper of madness,
That change,
That you laugh at,
Forget the masks,
And the tit for tat.
Fucking put it aside,
Drop your sword,
That killed your neighbour,
Swallow the words,
You were going to shoot,
Drop that gun,
Stand,
Don’t run,
For once be humane,
Take my life,
If stops all the pain.
Reach a hand,
And help her stand,
Hold her tear,
Hold her near,
Tell her all will be fine,
Show it clear,
Show your love,
And show it clear.
Hope,
She is all of that word,
Essence and soul,
The heart of man,
The heart you stole,
Must she loose herself,
And cut her light,
Must she watch another die,
In a mindless fight?
I see her hope,
Her tears of death,
Holding his hand,
And taking his breath,
As he smiles back his love,
She holds him close,
And Asks…
“Why is it at the end,
We see the light?”
JenniferB
I really enjoyed reading this Spraven! It was a great read, only my brain’s dead this morning, so don’t ask me to explain why just yet!!! ;-)
Spraven replied
I hope your brains is feeling alive now friend, a tonn of coffee should do, lol
Thanxz for the comment friend ; )
I am glad you liked this JenniferB!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend ; )
BiographyofRed8
a very deep insight into a persons character, whilst at the same time talking about issues on a larger scale, brilliantly interwoven together!
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, I’m glad you liked this ; )
I thought a message of hope and peace was good way to end the night.
Quite a rewarding piece for my soul, lol
Thanxz again friend!!
Erika .
Wow I really like this and it’s so true! It’s only when people are at the brink of death that they seek help, want to make things right, and look for the light. I think this is something valuable you have written for the world. The light is everywhere, not just when you die and we have to make things better. Strong and honest poem. ....
“_Why is it at the end,
We see the light_?”….awesome line. A definite favorite.
Spraven replied
Yes true, loght is everywhere, not just the tunnel at death. Make the most of searching for it here than on the other side. I believe life is more imporatant than the the wait for a heaven, I never want to leave here, lol
Thanxz Erika, I’m glad you liked this friend, those are the best lines I think, the whole poem is worhtless without them,lol Thanxz again friend!!! and for the fav, I appreciate that ; )
Erika .
I don’t know why those stupid dashes aren’t working…..Sorry…
Spraven replied
Lol
Rhenastarr
Great writing,wonderful read!! Blessings Friend!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz Rhenastarr, this is my attempt to find some light friend ; )
I’m glad you liked this piece friend, I really appreciate your comment and time, thank you!!!
JamieLA
A really great read! you certainly have a way with words :)
Spraven replied
Hi JamieLA, I really appreciate your comment and fav friend, thank you for your kindness ; )
linaji
“Cause baby.. there is no death”.. great Piece!!! I love your inquisitive nature my friend.. hey how is your hand???? xoxoxoo
Spraven replied
In the recycling universe, I guess that’s right friend ; )
I think looking for light here and now is more important than finding it in death.
Thanxz for your comment friend, I really appreciate it ; )
Yeah, the hand will just have to be fine, it was his own fault, he will have to suffer his stupidity.
Thanxz friend!!!! ; )
arvyart
Mesmerizing poem! I think you have been touched by loneliness and emptiness. I cannot imagine it’s possible to write so otherwise. Sensible poem with the apogee of the last two lines! Very spiritual! Love that.
Spraven replied
Thanxz arvyart, I really appreciate your visit mate.
I guess in writting you have to put yourself in there and yes to experience those feeling it makes it easier to write them I guess, Thanxz for your insight friend ; )
Thanxz for the comment, yeah, I think the last to lines are the best, thanxz again friend!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend ; )
wigs
excellent work….these words are so true…“Why is it at the end, We see the light?”, what prevents us beforehand?
Spraven replied
Thanxz wigs, yeah, they are very true, I guess life for some can get dark and we can walk the road and deny the light, but hope never stops even when we do.
Thanxz for your comment and time friend, I really appreciate it!!!!! ; )
Pamela Plante
I liked this one, it paints quite a picture.
Spraven replied
Thanxz Pam, I amglad you liked this one friend ; )
Thanxz for the visit and your time, I really appreciate it ; )
MyheART
This one speaks straight to the heart…wonderful writing friend:)
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend ; ) I really appreciate that and thnk you very much for the fav, it means alot.
I would have replyed sooner, I’ve been trying to catch up and this missed my eyes, thanxz for the comment friend!!!!
Del Millar
Great piece of writing friend. No waiting – the lights right there, just feel it in a thought.
Peace, bless you X
Spraven replied
Thanxz Del ; )
I really appreciate your visits friend, and love your comments, thanxz they mean a lot!!!
Astoreth
I really enoyed this one Spraven….this one I read through without getting hiccups…. ;-)) xx
Spraven replied
Lol, no hiccups, cool ; )
Thanxz friend, glad you liked this, I’m trying to write things in a nicer note, it hurts a bit, but I think I will get there ; )
JonoCarrick
POWERFUL!!!!!!
Spraven replied
I like your new name mate ; )
Thanxz for the comment friend, I really appreciate it!!!! ; )
bearpaw
this is just amazing friend… your writing goes straight to the heart and soul…. & it is so very true…& kinda left me slightly speechless :)...
Spraven replied
Thank you friend, and it’s thank to you that I wrote this, you are great inspiration and friend. Left you speachless, lol…..that’s a first friend ; P.
Thanxz for the comment I really appreciate it bearpaw!!!! ; )
LoneAngel
beautiful words .. so powerful and touches ones soul to read
Spraven replied
Thanxz LoneAngel, I really apprecaite you visit and comments, I hope to see more of your T design, they are awesome mate ; )
TearsCall
this is so beautiful….hope:)
Spraven replied
Thanxz TearsCall, I am glad you liked this piece, much appreciated friend!!; )