Princess
A message of no killing, starts with a man who as just killed his daughter boyfriend only protecting her from his violence, but in the process he losses his daughter….and the end is message that when we kill one we also kill the ones around and close to that person…..so don’t kill is the message….hope you enjoy this peace….
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now I have nothing left to say,
how can I say I’m sorry,
or look her in the eye,
a touch would ask forgiveness,
and to forgive,
would be a lie….
I tried to shield her,
to protect,
my thoughts seemed right,
to protect,
my Princess with all my might,
she was never weak,
but I was never right.
To the bone I was like him,
a mirror from the past,
making all the rules,
the bad fucking ass,
God,
it was like looking in a mirror,
as I stare at him now,
I feel so cold,
I sigh and shiver.
Silence says it all,
so loud it hurts my ears,
nothing really matters,
not the life I’ll loose in years,
I have already lost my daughter,
through her silent hateful tears.
I was only protecting my girl,
the apple of my eye,
almost to excess,
“To far!!” I hear her scream,
“Daddy I fucking hate you!!”
will be all that haunts my dream.
To protect,
is not to kill,
to kill,
suppress the will,
but still,
we get confused,
in killing one,
we kill another,
we kill a stranger,
we kill a brother….
TearsCall
oh such truth and power in these words…excellent writing an emotive and powerful message that needs to reach so many…:)
Spraven replied
Thanxz TearsCall, yeah a message you would thing people would have gotten by now, you know…...Thanxz for the comment friend and fav, I really appreciate it ; )
imod247
F**cking righteous peotery man kiss ass stuff love this poem it really makes you think hard about life taking I really sometimes feel a real pitty for those whom do take life and a forgivness I guess.
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, appreciated, yeah taking life is not just killing one but many, you know what a mean…..it can be a shit world, but there is hope….Thanxz again friend!!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav to friend, appreciated ; )
Rhenastarr
Another powerful emotional piece. As always well expressed friend.
Spraven replied
Thanxz Rhenastarr, apprecaited and the fav too friend.
I saw the image with the poem about the loss of the child, an excellent collaboration friend, you both did very well on a sad subject, nice one!!! ; )
Erika .
Wow Spraven, so intense.
These two parts got me:
I have already lost my daughter,
through her silent hateful tears.
“Daddy I fucking hate you!!”
will be all that haunts my dream.
Powerful message, Spraven. So nicely written. :)
Spraven replied
Thank you erika, I am glad you liked this, I really appreciate your comment friend!! I started of with a protective father that end in a message, I never saw that one coming, lol
Kristina Sans
Wow! I finally made it over and was just blown away! This is so intense, well written !
Spraven replied
Hi, how are you?
Thanxz for the comment strangedays3, I really appreciate it, and glad this blew you away friend ; )
Shoaib .
spraven man
you shit is killer in of itself !!! this is awesome
i totally see what ya mean .. we can never kill and expect to lose just that life
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, it was an unexpected message actaully, this was going somewhere else,and then it changed, but it turned out no that bad, if you liked mate and the others, then great, I’m, happy…...Thanxz for all you encouragement friend, I appreciate it!! And yes, kill one, you kill many…..killing is wrong…thanxz again Shoaib ; )
Leda D
this is awesome spraven, :)
Spraven replied
Thanxz friend, I am glad you think so, I really appreciate your thoughts ; ) Thanxz again!!
MyheART
awesome writing and message..:)
Spraven replied
Thank you Robin, appreciated, the message came last, it was on another direction, before the end, lol
Thanxz Robin!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too Robin, apprecaited friend!!
helene ruiz
a painfully powerful message in this….well done and intense
Spraven replied
Thanxz Helene, apprecaited friend ; )
pe-nutbutter
I love it!
Powerful, emotional, painful, eye opening, awsome!! XD
Great peice!!
Spraven replied
Thanxz mate, glad you liked this piece, it’s much appreciated friend!!! and thanxz for the Fav too!!
Ingrid Dance
This poem touches me deeply. Great work. A powerful and emotional message. Ingrid
Spraven replied
Thanxz Ingrid, I really appreciate your comment friend!!!
Amber Rose
omg this poem is amazing! it gave me goose bumps!
you are so talented :D
Spraven replied
Thanxz Amber, I really apprecaite that friend!!! You’re yellowbee’s friend, yeah? It’s good to meet you, and thanks for stopping by ; )
Spraven replied
Thanxz for the fav too friend : )
Antanas
lovely work
Spraven replied
Thanxz Antanas, I appreciate that mate ; ) !!!!!!
Amber Rose
omg ok ive gotta get away from this pc lol
like 10th time reading this this arvo hahaha
Spraven replied
Lol, 10th time! Wow…..thanzx ; )
Kasey Cline
WOW thats freakin deep (And that is not the word I said) Holy sh** you are so right!!!! I am in ahhhh over the way you write!!!
Spraven replied
Thanzx friend ; )
I am appreciating you comments and visits friend.
In this I thought I’d give a message for once…..
I’m happy you liked this Kasey!!