Friends ...

have you ever been there
watching others sit and glare
feeling their piercing stare
those who pretend to care
for their ‘friends’ also sitting there
in the same direction of that same glare
with damning thoughts of those sitting there
next to them on a nearby chair
their friend or ‘foe’ that they declare
are their pal, their mate next them there
i smile and think of my real friends
many whom i wish were by my side
those whom i know that care
for the good times that we will forever share
yes my real friends there
that would never stare or glare
and pretend to care
you see they are always there
because they know i care
forever ‘friends’, my dear reader friend
are rare
so be sure to take care
when selecting friends that will always be there
and show you that they really care
remember real friends are rare
this … i really do declare

Take care there !!!

  • DaisyLadiE

    DaisyLadiE

    Ralph Waldo Emerson once said ‘The only way to have a friend is to be one’
    Love your poem.

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thank you … my newest friend ;-)

  • Stormygirl

    Stormygirl

    Very good

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks stormy x

  • DaisyLadiE

    DaisyLadiE

    Thank you for considering me so…I am honoured ;0 after this poem I am sure you will make tons more :)

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    :-)

  • Serenity Stewart

    Serenity Stewart

    I love it Dave! Its so true!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks serenity … i watched a situation unfold in work today (two women – friends apparently) ... watched them but they were too busy to know that i was watching at lunch … i knew what one was thinking about the other however … sad really … thanks for commenting … much appreciated my friend ;-)

  • solareclips~Julie Alexander

    solareclips~Ju...

    Beautiful writing Dave!!! It is truely rare to find such great qualities in people. I feel blessed to have found one great friend in my lifetime, and am working on new ones as I type this!!!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    i’l be your cheeky friend if you like ... ;-) x

  • solareclips~Julie Alexander

    solareclips~Ju...

    lol, I like cheeky …..... :)~

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    thats it then … done deal … my happy little friend … ;-)

  • digitalmidge

    digitalmidge

    Awesome rhyming and metre here in this Dave, you are truly a gifted bloke in so many areas my friend, and truly you are just a super friend indeed… ;-)

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thankyou Zoe … me thinks the same of you ;-) ... dido

  • ljmaxwell

    ljmaxwell

    good

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks Latoya

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    OMG this is beautifully written and so very true!! I love it I am so faving this one!!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    your only kidding … i can tell … your softening me up there and pulling my leg again pixie … i know you are ;-)

  • Barry Norton

    Barry Norton

    Brill Dave

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks barry

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    Nopes Muffin I am so serious!! I absolutely love it and I did Fav it!!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    why thank you hun ;-)

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    No prob smuffin lol

  • tuffcookie

    tuffcookie

    “one cannot have true friends unless one is willing to be one “lol ok thats my quote of the day! i absolutely love it hun! its wonderfully written and very true. wonderful job!! Bravo! claps

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    now im happy snappy with a comment like that … :-D

  • tuffcookie

    tuffcookie

    good you should be! its wonderfully done :)

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thank you my FRIEND … x

  • tuffcookie

    tuffcookie

    your more than welcome ;)

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    :-)

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats

    so true , and really well said ,

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks mel

  • shilohlin

    shilohlin

    Dave this is really well written. love the cadence of the rhym. true words and truer meaning. absolutely beautiful

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks shilo

  • EAWilliams

    EAWilliams

    Clever and wise, nice job!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thank u

  • loramae

    loramae

    Ahhh…so you’re kin to Dr. Seuss too huh???! =) Great writing Dave!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    lol thanks

  • Lori Peters

    Lori Peters

    Such beautiful words. I feel exactly the same way about people but could never have expressed it so beautifully. Love it, SNAPPYDAVE!

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    thanks lori

  • Bevsimages

    Bevsimages

    Great sentiment & words…x ;))

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    cool Bev glad you liked it

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats

    your welcome

  • ajax

    ajax

    So true gotta be a friend first. I reckon you should have lots of friends, but only a few best ones in your life.Though most of my mates say I’m more of a fiend !!! Wascals I say Wascals the lot of ‘em. Well done Dave {>:

  • SNAPPYDAVE replied

    lol cool

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