The Mystery In the Man Not Solved - Last Words By Men On Last Chances to Show
This is the last new work I will likely post, but it is truth enough to merit no more. This is a story of life.
The Mystery In the Man Not Solved - Last Words By Men On Last Chances to Show belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, End Times, Flash Fiction, Self as Other, Short stories - Spherical Scriptings, Something To Say, Underground USA, United States and WMGThey were twins.
One music, one lyrics. When composing fun, playing gigs together. Listeners felt little as they performed united, but always each twin had solos.
Individually, they confused the audience: The music alone was soothing and kind, but the clearly heard lyrics were grating, dismal, and careless towards the crowd.
It never failed, that after shows the listeners were torn cleanly, loving or despising, for in the middle was simply white noise. Invisible.
Often the twins had to move on, those who had heard them perform injured – fighting violently over whether the experience was pure wonder or plagued wounding.
Neither wanted to cause any strife, so even when music wished to stay where a home had been built, he could not forsake lyrics.
They always played together… always traveling on. They were music fine and lyric foul. They were twins. They could not maintain alone, even a stable solo.
Sally Omar
G-Awesome!!!! Sally xxxooo
linaji
Holy Moley.. now that is transforming the feelings of mundanity.. into Goddess/God… you are a love dear one.. a Real Big Love.xox
Philosophy Lee
“They always played together… always traveling on.”
Like the ‘I’ in me, and my ego…
thanks for the breaks (insider info)
Write more please… if we could convince you… if not,
write on!
Philosophy Lee
you know… insider info sounds so freegin arrogant…
I had asked Gordon if he could break his paragraphs up so me and my ADD could stay focused. That’s the insider info… unless you had already broken them up in which case…
nevermind :)
Gordon Merrick... replied
You, my Postulation of Everything, are spot on clever… brutally so (in the good way.
Honestly, you should have read that manifesto… I have ADD too so I understand, but I was almost proud of myself for it. It’s an easy read. No pressure of course.
Philosophy Lee
ok I promise I will read it… in the meantime… you can’t leave, we just met!
“No pressure of course.” :)
linaji
You are drawing the desire for the Positive in your life G.. look at the surroundings here.. what a manifesto of clarity we want from our little birdie!! Lee wants the lines broken up and I just want to see the heart of thee.. ahh we adore you! and why not.. your just like us.. At one point I was way to smart for my own good.. I dummied up and found a bit of piece.. now ‘IT’S ALL GOOD IN THE HOOD’ as it were…..I like the message service..keep in the loop for real will ya? talk to you this evenig..my after noon.?
drjones
Both twins can stay; new audiences find old souls. Old souls grow, with or without their wings. Stay.
Landscriber
Well man, its interestingly done, but honestly something must be lost on me, lol. All the other people about seem to know something I’m missing, but I’m used to that.
Thanks for offering me that hosting position earlier, though I has to this girl named Jo to ask what it even was.
So where are you going?
ADPR
This reminds me of a poem by Poe entitled: The Fall of the House of Usher. The two siblings were connected, one with a physical illness and one with a mental one. When the both of them died, so did the house [the house crumbled].
Gordon Merrick... replied
A work I know well, but would never have compared myself to. Thank you for the flattery, but most of all for simply taking the time to read.
G