The Taste of Death
I read this piece The Taste of Life by Rhenastarr and was thinking of the ying and yang of things. The complete opposites in life and spirit, anyway this is the opposite of her wonderful piece.
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In a dark way…i like it…..it makes me think of the scales of life.
The Taste of Death belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, Core [C.O.R.E], Inspired By Life, The Art of Pain, Up & Coming Writers and WMGThe dry taste
of death
Lost on the bitter
Strike of pain
Maxoperandi
This is very apt today Peter…my business partner Malcolm lost his mother last night…so we are all a bit down today…as you say it makes you think of the scales of life!
skinnyman replied
So sorry to hear that max…but yes we all live on a scale…
Rhenastarr
A wonderful contrast to my piece. Well written my friend.
skinnyman replied
Thank you Rhena, you inspire :)
ArcadiaTempest
Me thinks this can speak of so many ’ pains ’ one may have in life, moments that we live through tasting that worst kind of bitter… X
skinnyman replied
indeed, pain is so general a term for what can ail us. Thank you m’lady x
Normaje
yes that is so, I just put up a piece myself, as they could not live apart…...Cheers
skinnyman replied
Ta so much N
Christie Moses
In all of life, there is dark and light. Life and death. You have expressed the dark of death perfectly xo
skinnyman replied
I just opposed Rhenastarr…took her piece and turned it on its head…but thank you christie:)
happyfeet5
Both pieces are great. The opposites. The yin and the Yang. Death is also part of life we must accept, but oh, how painful it is when it has to do with a loved one. Iris
skinnyman replied
it is so hard for all sorts of reasons…missed opportunities hurts the most i think..Thank you Iris
happyfeet5
Wow, you were thinking in a different wave than I was. Yes, missed opportunites hurt very bad, especially if you were the one that let them pass by. But sometimes you don’t see opportunity if it hit you in the face. Then it is too late. Iris
skinnyman replied
Your so right Iris.We carry on thinking all will be ok in the end, and do little about things that hurt. Mend the bridges.:)
bluewhite
Cotton mouth dry … gut wrenching pain. Well done.
skinnyman replied
Thank you Lin :)
cosimopiro
Give me the bitter strike of pain for now…..there’s plenty time yet before tasting dry death. Nice write. Like your other works too. Pleasure meeting you. Good cheers to you.
skinnyman replied
Ta C. i’m glad you found enough in my works to enjoy. peter