Shower Dance
Shower Dance belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, Blue Room, Core [C.O.R.E], Immortal Love, Midnight Ramblers, The Sensual Word, Up & Coming Writers and WMGWithin the morning shower
There is a rhythm of hot water
She dances to the music on the new day
A slow dance of soap and shampoo
Strokes and caresses
Skilfully choreographed
She cleanses her soft aching body
As a mother would her baby
Reliving the passion of the night before
bluewhite
I still say it is a The Oh So Sweet Curse . Perhaps passion the night before makes all the difference!!!!! Good on ya!
skinnyman replied
I remember your piece lol…Ta BW. I’m glad you like this.:) x
Cassidy JK (Ra...
I like this one so much. It is one of my favorite places to be…to think, to feel, to dream.
skinnyman replied
So kind Cass..to me the shower is where i go last thing at night to wash away the days troubles and prepare my mind for sleep.
Charma Chircop
Wow so beautiful and different,im enjoying reading you,,a fav.. and thanks for your kind comments on my writes-Charma
skinnyman replied
Your most welcomed Charma, your writings are very good. I’m glad your finding pieces that you like amongst my quite varied subjects matters. :)
Trenchtownrock
Loving the smoothness of this piece..it glides effortlessly.
skinnyman replied
Thank you TT. Its kind of odd that it didn’t feel smoothe when writting, but reads so :)
Lisa Jewell
sensual and cleansing….nothing like a hot soapy shower…tis only sad that nights before passion was washed away.
skinnyman replied
Only from the body Lisa…not the mind :) x
Lisa Jewell
Yes I realised you meant the body and not the mind
I meant the body…
Christie Moses
Oh My….quite sexy :) I love this Peter xoxo
skinnyman replied
Thank you Christie…glad you think it sexy too :) xo
Maxoperandi
Beautiful words Peter! Your starting to convert me!
skinnyman replied
Surely not max lol…...thanks for the compliment :)
Normaje
Beautiful, the short and wonderful words, Good on you…..Cheers
skinnyman replied
Ta N, very nice of you :)
ambient-1
Sweet and lovely! Congratulations on the well deserved feature!
skinnyman replied
Thank you A1. very kind of you :)
happyfeet5
Oh, my, you made a simple shower so delicious and imaginary from the begining to the shower to the end of what was being washed off. Love this. Iris
skinnyman replied
Thank you Iris, such a lovely comment to leave. x
lianne
This is really lovely, sensual and very visual Peter. And what a delightful image it leaves as well. Congratulations on your feature – this one certainly deserves it!
skinnyman replied
Ta lianne. Your comments always makes me smile :)
msdebbie
Ah the beautiful choreography of a shower! Sublime and sensual writing Peter xoxo
skinnyman replied
Ta so much Deb…in my minds eye, I can see her ‘dancing’ lol
Songmistress
Your writing puts me in that shower. Well done. Instant fave.
skinnyman replied
So sorry for missing your lovely comment S. Thank you so much…I must pay more attention lol :)