Time Ripples

skinnyman
Author: skinnyman
Word Count: 26
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Time Ripples

22.08.09
Another piece on Time. Not entirely happy with this, too many permutations…pebble of life..etc

OK! Due to poplar demand I am very happy with this…..thank you all who leave a comment

Time Ripples belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom In Words & Art, Love Bullets, Midnight Ramblers, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

The pebble of humanity
Drops into the universal ocean
Creating time ripples
Radiating to infinity
We ride the waves
In a search of our true selves

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    ah! Peter! This is just amazingly mind-blowing for me!!!! What a visual this is, I seriously felt those ripples in my mind and out into eternity….I LOVE THIS!

  • skinnyman replied

    so kind erika, you inspire me to pieces like this..xx

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Wish I had written this! ;D

  • skinnyman replied

    In part you did…xo

  • linaji

    linaji

    I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WITH ERIKA.. I want to weep.. hey you are floating right back to all that you are.. what a beautiful life!!

  • skinnyman replied

    I dont know what to say linaji. thank you is not enough…xoxo

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    Awesome Peter!

  • skinnyman replied

    Love that you think so Ushna….x

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Oh I inspire you?! What an honor…..that just made my day. x

  • bill bell

    bill bell

    My fave of yours Peter, well done dude.

  • skinnyman replied

    cheers bill…A real compliment mate..:)

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    Profound words, dynamically written. Well done.

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you JR, appreciated.

  • linaji

    linaji


    BLOG WILL BE OUT IN 2 DAYS! your in it!

  • skinnyman replied

    amazing linaji….just amazing of you to spoil me..xx

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Gorgeous thoughts!

  • skinnyman replied

    Ta Cass

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Amen …and it is truly so….sometimes it can be a really big wave as well…XX

  • skinnyman replied

    indeed, I’m glad this makes you think about your voyage of discovery. xx

  • charliethetramp

    charliethetramp

    you have captured so much
    with such few words…. peter
    a great endeavour
    ,with a minimalist use of lanauge
    i like this alot

  • skinnyman replied

    ta so much charlie, you know me, I try to break things down to the bones of it. Really glad you like this. :)

  • Ronjohnnj
  • skinnyman replied

    Thank you sooo much Ronjohnnj for featuring this piece.:))) your support in my work is very much appreciated.

  • Ronjohnnj

    Ronjohnnj

    This is excellent, nicely done = )

  • skinnyman replied

    ta Ron

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    Congrats on you VaVoom and Creative Writing features!

  • skinnyman replied

    Thank you so much, i’m seeing new faces all the time.:)

  • Michele Randell

    Michele Randell

    Yes the search for self is eternal…...Beautiful minimal piece of writing that conjures images in my subconscious that I think we all relate to…
    Congratulations on the feature !

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you Michele. I was out taking photos with a friend the other day, to create movement I dropped a stone in a pond…these things stay with me and play with my mind. Ta :)

  • YakusokuNono

    YakusokuNono

    Wow. This proves true poetry doesn’t have to say a lot to inspire emotion in those who read it. Brilliant!

  • skinnyman replied

    Thank you so much, love your comment..I try to break down my pieces to as little as posible, sometimes it can ramble on and on….

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    “Not entirely happy…” !!! are you mad ? !!! It’s brilliant Peter !! XX
    Becca

  • skinnyman replied

    Its a funny thing, the less satisfied i seem to be with a piece the more others like it..tehee.
    I just felt that there was more to say but couldn’t get to grips with it, so I bit the bullet and left it as it was…sooooo glad now….ta becca..your comment makes it all worth while :))

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    Very special piece.

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you BW, so very kind of you xxx

  • hsien-ku

    hsien-ku

    insightful and elegant writing

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you, just glad your enjoyed it..:)

  • Mieke Boynton

    Mieke Boynton

    Plenty of ripples here… Wonderfully rich imagery :)

  • skinnyman replied

    So glad you liked this Mieke :)

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