Time Ripples
22.08.09
Another piece on Time. Not entirely happy with this, too many permutations…pebble of life..etc
OK! Due to poplar demand I am very happy with this…..thank you all who leave a comment
Time Ripples belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom In Words & Art, Love Bullets, Midnight Ramblers, Up & Coming Writers and WMGThe pebble of humanity
Drops into the universal ocean
Creating time ripples
Radiating to infinity
We ride the waves
In a search of our true selves
Erika .
ah! Peter! This is just amazingly mind-blowing for me!!!! What a visual this is, I seriously felt those ripples in my mind and out into eternity….I LOVE THIS!
skinnyman replied
so kind erika, you inspire me to pieces like this..xx
Erika .
Wish I had written this! ;D
skinnyman replied
In part you did…xo
linaji
I AM SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WITH ERIKA.. I want to weep.. hey you are floating right back to all that you are.. what a beautiful life!!
skinnyman replied
I dont know what to say linaji. thank you is not enough…xoxo
Ushna Sardar
Awesome Peter!
skinnyman replied
Love that you think so Ushna….x
Erika .
Oh I inspire you?! What an honor…..that just made my day. x
bill bell
My fave of yours Peter, well done dude.
skinnyman replied
cheers bill…A real compliment mate..:)
JRGarland
Profound words, dynamically written. Well done.
skinnyman replied
thank you JR, appreciated.
linaji
BLOG WILL BE OUT IN 2 DAYS! your in it!
skinnyman replied
amazing linaji….just amazing of you to spoil me..xx
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Gorgeous thoughts!
skinnyman replied
Ta Cass
ArcadiaTempest
Amen …and it is truly so….sometimes it can be a really big wave as well…XX
skinnyman replied
indeed, I’m glad this makes you think about your voyage of discovery. xx
charliethetramp
you have captured so much
with such few words…. peter
a great endeavour
,with a minimalist use of lanauge
i like this alot
skinnyman replied
ta so much charlie, you know me, I try to break things down to the bones of it. Really glad you like this. :)
Ronjohnnj
skinnyman replied
Thank you sooo much Ronjohnnj for featuring this piece.:))) your support in my work is very much appreciated.
Ronjohnnj
This is excellent, nicely done = )
skinnyman replied
ta Ron
F.A. Moore
Congrats on you VaVoom and Creative Writing features!
skinnyman replied
Thank you so much, i’m seeing new faces all the time.:)
Michele Randell
Yes the search for self is eternal…...Beautiful minimal piece of writing that conjures images in my subconscious that I think we all relate to…
Congratulations on the feature !
skinnyman replied
thank you Michele. I was out taking photos with a friend the other day, to create movement I dropped a stone in a pond…these things stay with me and play with my mind. Ta :)
YakusokuNono
Wow. This proves true poetry doesn’t have to say a lot to inspire emotion in those who read it. Brilliant!
skinnyman replied
Thank you so much, love your comment..I try to break down my pieces to as little as posible, sometimes it can ramble on and on….
RebeccaWeston
“Not entirely happy…” !!! are you mad ? !!! It’s brilliant Peter !! XX
Becca
skinnyman replied
Its a funny thing, the less satisfied i seem to be with a piece the more others like it..tehee.
I just felt that there was more to say but couldn’t get to grips with it, so I bit the bullet and left it as it was…sooooo glad now….ta becca..your comment makes it all worth while :))
bluewhite
Very special piece.
skinnyman replied
thank you BW, so very kind of you xxx
hsien-ku
insightful and elegant writing
skinnyman replied
thank you, just glad your enjoyed it..:)
Mieke Boynton
Plenty of ripples here… Wonderfully rich imagery :)
skinnyman replied
So glad you liked this Mieke :)