A Mind In Shadow Haiku

skinnyman
Author: skinnyman
Word Count: 14
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A Mind In Shadow Haiku

7.07.09
The darker the shadow
The stronger the light is

A Mind In Shadow Haiku belongs to the following groups:

! 100% !, ! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom In Words & Art, Haiku - The Art of Japanese Poetry, Love Bullets, Midnight Ramblers, The Art of Pain, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

A mind in shadow
Is within reach of the light
that casts upon it

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    wonderfully put,dawn

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you dawn:) A recent theme resurfaces.

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    I just love this…..so beautifully expressed.

  • skinnyman replied

    thank you erika. I took a long time to finish after the initial idea. :) x

  • Cathryn Swanson

    Cathryn Swanson

    Very clever.

  • skinnyman replied

    ta C :)

  • annamora

    annamora

    ... I see … this is a really nice haiku … :)

  • skinnyman replied

    glad you like it anna:)

  • MrTAH

    MrTAH

    really nice friend…

  • skinnyman replied

    just playing with words, ta tah

  • veritasunsaid

    veritasunsaid

    Wonderful words; very clever
    and also FEATURED in Love Bullets:)

  • skinnyman replied

    So glad you like it V. and a feature too, very honoured :)))) smiles all round here.

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    I keep reading this….and it illuminates more each time…this is such a clever bullet Peter. I love the visual I play out in my mind with this one. :))

  • skinnyman replied

    really glad you like this karen, it has deeper meanings for me too than I was first aware of :)))

  • bill bell

    bill bell

    Sounds like an eclipse,well written.

  • skinnyman replied

    good interpretation.(of the heart?) :)

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