Adore
Tasting heaven eating succulent organic peaches.
My second off the cuff poem about these adorable peaches.
Irresistible
Peaches,
I am
on my knees,
Free,
Delighting in
Almost eternity,
Flame skin bursting,
Delivers the
Honey to the bee,
Sensuality
Let it be.
dairygirl
very wel writen and well worded, like what you have writen
Silvia Manuela replied
Thankyou, dairygirl, for your lovely compliments.
Marion Cullen
Oooh, juicy, mouthwatering and very sensual.
Silvia Manuela replied
Thanks Marion your your lovely feedback. I couldn’t help but write about these beauties!
susan davies
yes so well written
Silvia Manuela replied
Thankyou Susan, I’m glad you liked it!
Sally Omar
Silvia, This is awesome….I love it. Sally xxoo
Silvia Manuela replied
Thanks for your lovely comments Sally!
Estelle O'Brien
Beautiful.
Estelle O'Brien
Ooops…I mean beautiful poem! I have organic peaches and have just made jam with them. Standing in the orchard, sampling in the sunsine, with juice running down my arm..blissfull..yes you said it well….
Silvia Manuela replied
I agree, ripe, well grown peaches are one of Nature’s gifts. Thanks for your kind comments, Estelle.
Helene Kippert
I love this one Silvia – it seems to link the experience the moment of tasting with the experience of the timeless. Wonderful!
Silvia Manuela replied
Thanks Helene for your insightful and very kind comments, I am glad you liked it so much!
Frederick
Mouthwateringly beautiful.
Silvia Manuela replied
Yes – they were – now just a memory, and a poem! Thanks for the strong appreciation of the poem, Frederick.
Vasile Stan
I’m starting to believe more and more that we are what we express.
What I can see here, beside the beauty of the poem in itself, it’s such a joy and zest for life with a lot of respect for what it has been given to us all. Free and clear.
Very beautiful, in simple, yet powerful words and images Silvia… on my knees with respect.
Silvia Manuela replied
Thankyou Vasile, you see the poetry very clearly. Yes, I can say, maybe, that we are, or become, what we express …
Thankyou for your beautiful and thoughtful feedback.