22 alive
Have you ever witnessed the metropolis in NICU (Neonatal Intensive Care Unit) ~ when the arrival of a baby is unexpectedly early and needs life support ~ 12 October 2008
Unfurling through the legs of Time
is baby Catherine, she slides
unannounced, fingers and toes like an antenna
feverishly unwind to the hostile life abound,
a trickle, and she nestles inside her sinewy and scarified skin,
eyes closed, her reserves are low, she slips into her inner being.
Sustenance burns as electric science, torchlit to the
butterfly’s summit where nurses skip within the prayers and buried tears,
and these mighty neonates cling to smiling auras
of the devout workers and the struggling parents.
Breathless shock weaves
like an uncertain myth
among
and beyond
these egg-popped Herculean cribs of care.
I hear the nurse making her telephone call, her enduring call is unblinkered
as agency after agency has no staff available for a shift, so softly,
a paediatrician’s wife embraces the shortfall.
I wonder if
the cut-off point
will succeed 22 weeks?
Maker, maker, in the vapour,
Chances are your loving eyes,
come right or wrong mistakes
still saving lullabies.
Sorina Williams
I have never witnessed anything to do with the NICU, but I am sure it is exactly as you painted it.
Love the last four lines..
Silvia Manuela replied
Hi Sorina, thanks for your wonderful feedback :)
Sally Omar
Silvia, Absolutely amazing…Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo
Silvia Manuela replied
Thanks very very much Sally X
Vasile Stan
Oh Silvia, how much of your Self you put in this and all your writings… if only the maker can hear your voice… your voice need not be loud, but words spoken in faith…
Silvia Manuela replied
Vasile, I’m sure you know about the field where all can be heard. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words …
Gregory John O...
Nice one…
Silvia Manuela replied
Thanks for all your supportive feedback Gregory :)
Shylie Edwards
so amazing!!! you are great….cheers from us
Silvia Manuela
Hi Shylie, I think you’re great too xox thanks
Helene Kippert
Great work silvia
Silvia Manuela replied
Thank you Helene for your support and encouragement :))