22 alive

Silvia Manuela
Author: Silvia Manuela
Word Count: 163
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22 alive

Have you ever witnessed the metropolis in NICU (Neonatal Intensive Care Unit) ~ when the arrival of a baby is unexpectedly early and needs life support ~ 12 October 2008

Unfurling through the legs of Time
is baby Catherine, she slides
unannounced, fingers and toes like an antenna
feverishly unwind to the hostile life abound,
a trickle, and she nestles inside her sinewy and scarified skin,
eyes closed, her reserves are low, she slips into her inner being.

Sustenance burns as electric science, torchlit to the
butterfly’s summit where nurses skip within the prayers and buried tears,
and these mighty neonates cling to smiling auras
of the devout workers and the struggling parents.

Breathless shock weaves
like an uncertain myth
among
and beyond
these egg-popped Herculean cribs of care.

I hear the nurse making her telephone call, her enduring call is unblinkered
as agency after agency has no staff available for a shift, so softly,
a paediatrician’s wife embraces the shortfall.

I wonder if
the cut-off point
will succeed 22 weeks?

Maker, maker, in the vapour,
Chances are your loving eyes,
come right or wrong mistakes
still saving lullabies.

  • Sorina Williams

    Sorina Williams

    I have never witnessed anything to do with the NICU, but I am sure it is exactly as you painted it.
    Love the last four lines..

  • Silvia Manuela replied

    Hi Sorina, thanks for your wonderful feedback :)

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Silvia, Absolutely amazing…Hugs, Sally xxxxoooo

  • Silvia Manuela replied

    Thanks very very much Sally X

  • Vasile Stan

    Vasile Stan

    Oh Silvia, how much of your Self you put in this and all your writings… if only the maker can hear your voice… your voice need not be loud, but words spoken in faith…

  • Silvia Manuela replied

    Vasile, I’m sure you know about the field where all can be heard. Thank you for your kind and encouraging words …

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    Nice one…

  • Silvia Manuela replied

    Thanks for all your supportive feedback Gregory :)

  • Shylie Edwards

    Shylie Edwards

    so amazing!!! you are great….cheers from us

  • Silvia Manuela

    Silvia Manuela

    Hi Shylie, I think you’re great too xox thanks

  • Helene Kippert

    Helene Kippert

    Great work silvia

  • Silvia Manuela replied

    Thank you Helene for your support and encouragement :))

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