An apple leaf remains
on these last Autumn days
carriage of the eloquent tree
welcome like buttered toast
caress my scarf & coat
this graceful sipping breeze
A Sipping Breeze
An apple leaf remains
on these last Autumn days
carriage of the eloquent tree
welcome like buttered toast
caress my scarf & coat
this graceful sipping breeze
olawunmi
Silvia this is sweeet!!!! gentle and soft on the senses…
juice
wow…really love this…a favourite of mine…thank you for writing such beautiful words…’carriage of the eloquent tree’....mmmmm very delightful
Helene Kippert
A fave Silvia
Vasile Stan
...this graceful sipping breeze. Wow! This poem is a gentle storm of arabesque beauty, Silvia.
Shylie Edwards
‘sipping breeze’ es i agree WOW…................too good Silvia
Sally Omar
Silvia, Awesome, as usual…Sally xxoo
Ushna Sardar
awesome Silvia!!
Maya -
Your poem is beautiful and really gives the sense that winter is just around the corner.
Silvia Manuela
Thankyou Summayyah, Jewels, Helene, Vasile, Shylie, Sally & Ushna for keeping this poet’s spirits up in the ‘sipping breeze’ – Thankyou Everyone for your time and supportive feedback.
Silvia Manuela
and Maya too! x
Roscoe Davis III
beautiful poem